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MrsGilGrissom

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #90 on: January 30, 2009, 08:52:06 PM »
Sorry guys.
If I could show you my calendar I would, but maybe all I need to say is that if you looked, there would be something on every day of the week thanks to my classes.

On top of that, I'm working on the site!
You should check it out.
We have our own FanFiction site just like FanFiction.net and I have the forum up.

Once I fix the bugs, and finish writing a paper, I'll update  ;D

caz

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #91 on: January 31, 2009, 03:44:50 AM »
Sorry guys.
If I could show you my calendar I would, but maybe all I need to say is that if you looked, there would be something on every day of the week thanks to my classes.

On top of that, I'm working on the site!
You should check it out.
We have our own FanFiction site just like FanFiction.net and I have the forum up.

Once I fix the bugs, and finish writing a paper, I'll update  ;D


life getting in the way can be a pain haha



As I said no pressure

MrsGilGrissom

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #92 on: February 16, 2009, 01:10:26 AM »
CHAPTER 12

What was she supposed to think? She's a naked woman alone in a bathtub, and all the sudden she's grabbed by someone. Magnify that by the fact that she is in a hotel room, and had checked in alone.

Her past must've helped out with the fact that she reacted faster than she could think, and soon, Sara's fist was flying.

"Oh my god, Gil! I'm? I'm sorry? What are you doing here?" Grissom laughed as he held the bridge of his nose between his thumb and index finger. "I came for you." She tried to pull him closer to kiss him, but he winced. "Ow."

"I'm so-so-so-sor," he kissed her just like he had many other times when she, as she put it, over talked around him. He felt her body turn to mush as she let her guard down, accepting what was happening. She pulled his body up and over the side of the bathtub.

The water in the tub climbed up and over the edge, slapping their bodies in tiny waves. Something fell from above and hit Grissom in the head. "Aw, what's with my luck? What is this?" He reached into the water and pulled out a tiny black box.

"My mp3 player!" Sara tried to look disappointed, but couldn't. Her smile had been suppressed, truly suppressed, since she had to leave him. She had missed this feeling. The feeling that warms your body, and you can't stop laughing. You're so happy that your giddiness makes you seem stupid to the rest of the world; but she didn?t care.

He climbed up and over her, slowly resting himself up above her body. "I've missed you so much. I have so much to tell you." He sighed, he missed this look in her eyes. For a while, he thought he had lost it forever.
« Last Edit: February 16, 2009, 01:12:01 AM by MrsGilGrissom »

caz

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #93 on: February 16, 2009, 08:08:00 AM »
yipeeeee lol  only kidding.

Oh can you imagine pulling Grissom into the tub with you Mmmmmm, ok a girl can dream

Butterfly114

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #94 on: February 16, 2009, 08:15:25 AM »
Welcome back, great update.

GSRLOVER34

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #95 on: February 16, 2009, 08:16:43 AM »
Another chapter, sweet!!!!

Great chapter! Wouldn't mind having Grissom in my tub.  ;)

trishj

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #96 on: February 16, 2009, 11:26:26 AM »
I laughed myself at poor Gil,   ;D                      great update look fordward to more.

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #97 on: February 16, 2009, 12:05:24 PM »
I like this picture of Sara naked and Grissom wet--fully clothed but wet!
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

MrsGilGrissom

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #98 on: February 16, 2009, 01:14:51 PM »
lol
Perhaps Oldfanatic should add a Naughty Fan Fiction section.  :D

MrsGilGrissom

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #99 on: February 24, 2009, 03:10:50 AM »
Chapter 13

He lowered his head to her chest, and rested it there. Instead of running her hands through his hair as she had wanted, she sat up, disturbing his comfortable position. He backed away on his knees, and stood up in the tub. His eyes searched hers for a moment, and then he stepped out of the tub. Taking a towel with him, he stepped into the shower stall, removed his soaked clothes and hanged them to dry. Before stepping out, he wrapped himself in the towel.

He stepped onto the tile floor, shot her a glance, and walked out of the bathroom. There she sat, alone. She drew her knees close to her chest, and shook her head. After a moment of thought, she let the water out of the tub, grabbed a robe off of the rack, and wrapped it around her. A chill swept through the bathroom, and she huddled up closer to the fabric.

Stepping out of the bathroom didn't immediately reveal him. After another draft crept through the suite, her attention was drawn to the balcony. She walked past the glass doors, and there he was leaning on the rail, staring at nothing.

She tried to speak, but her voice cracked. She tried once more, clearing her throat. "What's wrong?" A thousand thoughts ran through her mind, none of them good.

He sighed and turned to face her. He looked at her with soft eyes, so fragile, and dropped his head. She stood there for what seemed like forever.

"Nothing," he said. He massaged his temples with his hands. "I never expected..," he sounded weak, and she wanted to cry for him.

"I know," she whispered. She reached for his hands, and took them in her own, drawing him closer. She wrapped herself around him.

"I'm so sorry." She clasped her arms around his face, and kissed him softly. "I never did mean to hurt you." She shook her head in disapproval. "I did what I always do, I ran away."

His eyes gleamed in the moonlight. "I want to forget about it and move on. God, Sara. I'm so happy to see you." He drew her closer by the hips, and kissed her with as much intensity as he could to let her know he meant what he had said.

He felt a tear run down from her cheek, and she backed away a bit, drawing in a ragged breath. He kissed her cheek where the tear was, and then wiped the wet spot away with his thumb. She smiled at him, and then a shiver erupted through her body.

"I'm cold," she said, hugging the robe tighter. He moved forward, took her hand and lead her back into the hotel room. It seemed forever that he would finally be able to keep her warm.

Billyjorja

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #100 on: February 24, 2009, 06:01:30 AM »
Wonderful chapter, I'm crying.

Trish

trishj

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #101 on: February 24, 2009, 10:06:35 AM »
Fantastic chapter  more when you can

caz

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #102 on: February 24, 2009, 10:11:45 AM »
another great chapter  :)



GSRLOVER34

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #103 on: February 24, 2009, 10:31:21 AM »
Great chapter!

Butterfly114

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #104 on: February 24, 2009, 10:53:30 AM »
I agree Great Chapter