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dyneemo

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #60 on: January 19, 2009, 11:11:04 PM »
Just caught up with this one and now I must join the ranks of eager readers who are screaming for a new chapter.

(I wish we had a little smiley guy wearing reading glasses...but, alas, we do not. So, I'll just put the little guy blowing kisses at you because I love your story  :-* )

Billyjorja

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #61 on: January 20, 2009, 06:15:58 AM »
Congrats on the new job.
Congrats on the chapter but if you leave us hanging for long I will get very annoyed!!!! (only kidding).

Trust Sara to check out the bathroom.

Trish

RusCSI

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #62 on: January 20, 2009, 06:29:37 AM »
Oh, sounds nice. I hope I'll see the next update soon :)

trishj

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #63 on: January 20, 2009, 07:09:11 PM »
Glad things are starting to come together.  Good job on the update - just not long enough.  Come on, Gil is in the shower rigth.  ::)  Or even better, already in the bed.   ;)

MrsGilGrissom

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #64 on: January 21, 2009, 10:28:42 PM »
CHAPTER 10

"Yes!" The big tub was all Sara needed to see. She had hot water filling the small pool in no time.  She retraced her steps back into the room, and grabbed her clothes out of her bag. Now for the first time in days, she was going to have a bath on dry land.

By the time she got back into the bathroom, the water was at a good enough level for her, so she shut off the valve. She sat on the side of the tub and felt the water. Hot enough to boil her pains away. She stood up and stripped her clothes away, letting them fall carelessly to the floor.

She retrieved her mp3 player from the bathroom counter, put the ear buds in hear ears, and climbed in. There was a towel rack up above the tub, so she carefully clipped the tiny player to it, so not to allow it to fall in the water and be ruined.

When finally she was ready to relax, she sunk down into the tub, pressed play and listened to the music. With her eyes closed she relaxed her body and allowed the heat of the water to seep into her every muscle.


Knowing her habits, he could finally get off of the balcony. This was it. He slid the sliding glass door open slowly, as not to make any noise, and stepped into the room for the first time since Sara was in his presence.

Butterfly114

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #65 on: January 21, 2009, 10:38:41 PM »
On the balcony, very clever, update soon please.........................

GSRLOVER34

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #66 on: January 21, 2009, 10:57:42 PM »
Great ud! Go in and and get your girl Grissom!   :-* ;) :D

caz

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #67 on: January 22, 2009, 02:28:20 AM »
great update

BUT.....................come on get Grissom stripped off and in that bath lol  :D

Billyjorja

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #68 on: January 22, 2009, 06:02:29 AM »
Agree with Caz, but need pictures!!!!!!!

Trish

caz

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #69 on: January 22, 2009, 06:11:34 AM »
Agree with Caz, but need pictures!!!!!!!

Trish


haha

yeah pictures would be even better lol

aingeal1

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #70 on: January 22, 2009, 12:36:01 PM »

Great chapter MGG

He was on the balcony the whole time. Watch him sneak up on her and scare the living daylights out of her.

Can't wait for the next update

sixtyplus

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #71 on: January 22, 2009, 02:04:27 PM »
Great he's there !! I know he will sneak in the bathroom and turn her music off ,oh PLEASE hurry and update dont be a spoilsport  ;D

MrsGilGrissom

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #72 on: January 22, 2009, 03:12:21 PM »
Be patient friends  ;D
You wouldn't want me to rush out a stinky chapter would you  ???
lol, I have class tonight, so I'll see what I can do.

caz

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #73 on: January 22, 2009, 05:44:36 PM »
Be patient friends  ;D
You wouldn't want me to rush out a stinky chapter would you  ???
lol, I have class tonight, so I'll see what I can do.


Wish you wouldn'y do that lol


I got all excited again when i saw you had posted.

no hurry now take your time haha


RusCSI

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Re: The Tiki Hut
« Reply #74 on: January 24, 2009, 11:03:59 AM »
I'm sorry for passing this, I know I'm bad girl ;D Okay, I will wait. And this sounds great!