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« Reply #30 on: June 12, 2009, 11:59:08 PM »
He found Sara where he had left her. She had bathed, walked around the hotel?s grounds; she was dressed for dinner and her eyes let him know she was rested. Seeing the stack of packages, she tilted her head to one side and lifted a brow. He tore wrappings away to show her a miniature pyramid carved from wood and a handful of postcards, and, saving his last purchases for her to unwrap, he handed these to her.

From the first package, Sara lifted a necklace of gold set with turquoise and lapis. ?The necklace is supposed to be a fine Egyptian antique I purchased for ten dollars?watched as the guy put it together.? They both laughed. He straddled the lounge chair to face her. ?These are special?I?I wanted to get something for later.?

The two small packages were wrapped in delicate paper and tied with a fine cord; one was actually folded into a small box. Sara untied the smallest one to find two dainty baby shoes inside; precise stitching formed each one in soft, cotton fabric. She lifted both to her place in her palm.

?Baby shoes?oh, Grissom.?

?Yeah.?

?They are so tiny.?

?Yeah.? He lifted the shoes from her hand. ?Open the other one.?

The second package was larger and Sara unfolded the paper as carefully as she had held the shoes. Folded inside were three colored cotton fabrics woven as fine as silk, pale blue, pink, and lilac. The first was a tiny baby gown in blue, beautiful in its simplicity. The second and third items were small exquisitely sewn dresses with pastel embroidery creating a flower garden from hundreds of elegant stitches. The little collar and sleeves of one was trimmed in lace and more dainty flowers. The lilac one?Sara touched the edges of the collar and sleeves?had some kind of complicated gathered stitches decorated with tiny vines and flowers. She looked closer at the flowers.

?Bees. There are bees among the flowers.? She looked up at him, her eyes suddenly wet.

?Yeah.? He cleared his throat. ?I thought?I thought you might like them.?

She reached for him, pulling him to her and meeting his lips with hers as tears fell from her eyes.

Later, she smoothed each dress and smiled her broad grin. ?Little Gil is going to look funny wearing these dresses. I guess he can wear a ball cap so everyone knows he?s a boy.?

Grissom was busy dressing for dinner. ?Little Bizzy Bee is a girl and she will be beautiful in them.? He leaned across the bed to kiss her. ?Beautiful?like her mother.?

Before the sun was completely gone, they were back in their room, but missed the pyramid light show from their bed. Grissom was busy pleasing his wife; his wife was equally active taking care of his needs and desires. Soft laughter, the taste of her skin on his lips, the feel of his hands in her hair excited both as desires met passion in the flickering shadows of the ancient pyramids.

Sara woke in the night to strange sounds and an empty bed.

?Gil?? She got no answer. She got out of bed, pulling a tee shirt over her head. ?Gil?? She stretched as she followed the light to the bathroom. She heard the sound again?anyone who had ever thrown up knew the retching noise. She pushed open the door to see Grissom sitting on the side of the tub, a towel covering his face. Feverish eyes met hers as she came to his side.

He held up a hand. ?Don?t get to close?I don?t want to give this to you.?

Sara?s hand covered his cheek. ?Only vomiting?? He nodded. She wet the towel in his hands. ?How many times?? He held up two fingers before leaning over the toilet. She disappeared to return with two bottles.

Grissom wiped his face with the towel. ?You shouldn?t be in here.?

She pulled a small padded stool from the make-up counter and sat beside him. ?If you have anything contagious, I?ve already caught it. Drink.? She opened a bottle, added a small packet of powder to it and shook it up before handing it to him to drink.

?I?ll just throw it up.?

?That?s okay. Drink it.?

He also drank the pink liquid in the other bottle. He vomited most of it up within minutes. Sara continued sitting with him until his stomach calmed and he no longer threw up the water she offered. She put him back to bed, giving him a small pill to swallow.

?How do you know this will work?? He asked.

?The ship?they gave me everything they had to stop seasickness?nothing worked. It was days before I could hold down food.? She wrapped arms around him and cuddled against his back. ?I?ll know if you get up this way.? Her head nestled against his shoulder.

?I should have been with you, Sara.?

?I missed you every day.?

His hands covered hers. ?I?m sorry I wasn?t there.?

?You came.? She hugged him tighter. ?You came?all that way.? Her fingers played along his chest. ?How does your stomach feel? No gurgling that I can hear.?

His fingers caressed hers. ?I was so afraid, Sara. Afraid you wouldn?t want me; afraid you were angry; afraid you had found someone else.?

She squeezed his as tight as she could. ?I think you are hallucinating tonight.? She paused, ?I?ve always wanted you and you know I can never be angry with you?not for long.? He heard a quiet laugh. ?I thought you might find someone else.?

Grissom rolled to face her, wrapping his arms around her, ?No one but you, Sara. I?ve never loved anyone but you.? Quietness descended on them in the darkness.

?We are going to have a baby, Gil.?

?Yeah, we are.?

They both slept, and whatever caused his stomach upset did not reoccur?the pink liquid, the bottled water, the powder added to it, or the white pill had worked.

"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #31 on: June 13, 2009, 05:37:17 AM »
That was wonderful.  Gil is so caring.

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #32 on: June 13, 2009, 08:01:33 AM »
Little Gil in a dress with a Cub baseball cap, adorable.  Grissom taking care of Sara, letting her rest, and then Sara taking care of Grissom, true love.
Look forward to the next update.

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« Reply #33 on: June 13, 2009, 01:10:43 PM »
lovely caring Gil and Sara  more soon please :) :D

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #34 on: June 13, 2009, 02:59:03 PM »
The next day they met with Kermit for the last time. He would move on to other tourists with the same stories, the same casual, reckless driving, the same guided tours. Grissom passed him cash as a tip for his service and the man bowed and shook their hands. He had made arrangements for them to leave on the sleeper train, making sure they reserved a small private compartment, and alerted his ?cousins? that they were his friends.

They stayed on hotels grounds, walked in the gardens, rested and ate plain foods before packing their bags for the night train trip to Luxor. A flight would have taken an hour; the train left late with a scheduled arrival for dawn. Sara and Grissom settled into the small cubicle called a sleeper compartment with a bag of food between them. Sara knew he had eaten something in the market to cause his stomach upset. She watched him as carefully as he had been watching her.

?You don?t have to check everything I eat, you know,? he huffed, slightly amused that she was taking such care.

Sara elbowed him. ?And you don?t have to watch every step I take, Gil Grissom,? she chided back to him. Secretly, she appreciated his concern.

Within an hour, a train employee arrived to fold down the stacked narrow beds, leave bottles of water and small towels, and took their breakfast order. Grissom and Sara watched from the corridor as he smoothed brightly plaid blankets over each bed, showed them adjustable air vents and left them alone as quickly as he had arrived.

?I?m not sleeping up there.? Grissom said as he pointed to the top bunk. ?Neither are you.?

Sara laughed. ?I can climb up there.?

?I know you can?you aren?t. I married you to sleep with you.?

His words worked. She slept with him?after making love with him.

?I?ve never undressed on a train,? she said as she slipped her shoes from her feet.

?Allow me,? he whispered. He unbuttoned her blouse and slipped it from her shoulders and hanging it on a hook above her head. His shirt followed. The tie on her Egyptian pants released with an easy pull and puddle at her feet. ?I like that.? He said as his hand slipped around her hip and snuggled her to his own hips.

They both laughed as they moved with the rhythm of the train. ?We may never to this again,? he said.

?Yes, we will?just not on a train!?

He pulled her into his arms and she felt his smile against her mouth. His pants disappeared into the shadows of the compartment. 

Before dawn they were on the train platform with their bags looking for the transfer bus to the boat they would take up the Nile. The transfer got them to the ship, and after spending a few minutes in the lobby, they found a guide to take them to Karnak Temple. The sunlight was barely on the horizon as the old car took them on a short drive to the temple, the young guide explaining the significance of the temple area, how smart they were to come so early to see the most beautiful site in Egypt.

The young woman was correct. They stood in the Avenue of the Sphinxes as the sun?s rays slanted into the long passageway of the Hypostyle Hall. The growing light brightened the sky to an orange blush, turned the barren hills to pink, and as the sun moved, a purple haze settled in the west.

Sara looked at Grissom as he slowly turned, taking in all that was around him. He gave her a crooked grin. ?Unlike anywhere else on earth,? he said before circling arms around her.

The guide approached them. ?It is beautiful at night?with spotlights.? She pointed high about their heads. ?Details up there become apparent with the lights from below.? The girl?s tour took them into the temple, courtyards, and sun rooms, to see the colossal statues, a tall obelisk, the colonnade with carved scenes and inscriptions covering every inch of space on stone surfaces. They stepped over and around stones that had once been statues, steps, walls and floors. By noon, the temperature had risen with the sun and they returned to their boat.

Their ship was a small one compared to others docked along the river?s edge taking on only 80 passengers. The hotel-sized cabin had a large window, a king size bed, and a large bathroom with a tub. They would spend several days floating along the river, stopping at the Valley of the Kings, several temples, the Aswan dam, and a few museums. At one stop, they sailed in one of the native felucca, a small, narrow boat powered by oars and sails.

From the deck, or from their room, Sara and Grissom watched the parade of other boats and ships of varying sizes, saw farms of bright green growing cotton, sugar cane, and cabbages. In places, birds filled the sky as white ibises lifted and drifted overhead in the blue sky. Occasionally, they saw belching smoke of factories surrounded by brown mud brick houses of workers.

The two had already established a partnership that needed no inclusion of others and found little reason to spend time with other travelers. They were observers of their fellow shipmates?sunburned women and white skinned business men, tipsy couples and retirees, and a few sullen teenagers who wanted to be elsewhere.

Their last night, they had returned to Luxor and the two found their way back to the temples at sunset. The smell of jasmine filled their noses as the sounds of the call to prayer came from surrounding mosques. They walked among the columns and the statues and the sphinxes to see the carved details of a historic land and society.

Sara?s voice from the bathroom brought Grissom to the door as fast as he could move. She stood draped in a towel with a look of astonishment on her face.

?What?s wrong??

Her hand lay flat against her belly.

He reached her in two strides. ?Are you okay??

She placed his hand underneath hers. ?The shower?I think I?ve felt movement for a couple of days?always in the shower?just didn?t know what it was.?

Grissom smiled; his hand rested lightly on her abdomen, then the movement occurred again. A smile broke across his face and he gathered her in his arms.

"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #35 on: June 13, 2009, 08:20:03 PM »
Great chapters! That was really sweet that they both felt the baby move at the same time.

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #36 on: June 14, 2009, 07:57:09 AM »
Lovely update.  When you are in love you don't need anyone else.

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« Reply #37 on: June 14, 2009, 10:48:14 AM »
How beautiful that they shared that flutter of life.

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #38 on: June 14, 2009, 01:18:53 PM »
A/N: One more chapter after this one! Enjoy!

?They found their new home waiting, filled with boxes and furniture left by movers. Walls had been painted, new carpet and tiles had been installed, new appliances had been put in the kitchen, new wiring for every electronic device known had been snaked through walls. Downstairs, two bedrooms shared a small bathroom, a dining room would become an office, the living room was large enough for a dining table, and lots of wall space waited their books.

Their dog had made a temporary home with the neighbors and welcomed them with a wagging tail and a deep sigh as he hopped on their bed and stretched out. Sara?s mother and the community where she made her home welcomed their new neighbors as long missed family members. They laughed at Grissom?s Egyptian outfit, agreeing that his lightweight pants and shirts were perfect for gardening. They loved the husband of the young woman they considered to be a shared daughter.

A few weeks would pass before test results revealed the gender of their baby?a girl just as Grissom had predicted. He smiled for days as he watched Sara settle into a calm, mellow routine. She walked each day to visit her mother and the women at the neighboring farm. She hung pictures, put books on shelves, helped with planting a garden. Her figure grew round?not everywhere, just in her belly. Pregnancy suited her, he thought.

Grissom was working on beehives when he saw her walking across the field of flowers, her body swaying in that rhythm of late pregnancy. She had started wearing dresses lately, he realized, loose fitting, flowing fabric that fluttered in the wind as she walked.

?Greg is coming!? She called.

He stopped working. ?When?? She and Greg kept in regular contact with emails but he had not visited.

?Next week. He?s coming to the city for a book meeting.? She closed the distance between them and reached to hug him. She had to slide her belly underneath his arm to get within arms reach today. ?I think he wants to see how big I am.?

He kissed her. ?You know you are beautiful.?

?Greg arrived and, as with good friends, the three fell into a familiar, comfortable camaraderie. Grissom fixed drinks, Sara fixed food, and Greg talked. His story telling abilities had grown after he had written and promoted his Las Vegas book and he related events, incidents, and happenings of the lab with details that most people would have forgotten. He laughed at his jokes and his mistakes; grew somewhat serious as he told of Catherine?s supervision, and, with solemn words, related the lack of contact with Warrick Brown?s son.

?Tina does not want us to visit. Nick sees Eli but he has to really work around Tina to do it?sees her shopping and invites her to eat with him. The little guy looks so much like Warrick.?

Grissom told him of the financial guardianship he held for Warrick?s son. ?It?s all through lawyers. I don?t want to interfere but I can ask to see him.?

They talked until late in the night; Sara slept against Grissom?s shoulder until she woke with a cramp and ambled to the bedroom, leaving the two to continue without her. She kissed her husband and her visitor.

?Don?t try to make-out with my wife, Greg,? Grissom warned as Greg?s prolonged contact turned into a two arm hug.

Sara heard their laughter as she stretched underneath the covers and rolled to her side, attempting to sooth the slight cramping in her lower belly by massaging her lower back which had ached all day.  Too much excitement, she thought.

She had not slept well until Grissom came to bed. He had gently massaged her back, her shoulders, placed pillows under her knees and she finally dosed as his warm fingers moved along her spine. When she woke, her back ache had returned and the need for a bathroom break got her out of bed. She went into the kitchen and shook her head at the remains of the party with Greg. She knew the heavy bottle belonged to Grissom while the beer bottles were Greg?s. Moving the bottles to the sink, she realized a trickle of warm fluid was sliding along her inner leg.

Surprise turned to realization as she grabbed a towel. Labor. She headed to the bathroom and turned on the shower.

Grissom was sleeping soundly until he shifted against pillows and reached for Sara. His brain heard water?the sound of rain, he thought?before he realized it was not rain and the bed beside him was empty.

?Honey?? He asked as he pulled the shower curtain back.

She smiled. ?I believe,? she said as she turned off the water, ?that your daughter has decided its time for her birthday.?

He did not move until she reached for a towel near him and, automatically, he handed it to her.

She laughed. ?You really don?t want to go out in your boxers, baby!?

?Greg is upstairs,? he said.

Sara wrapped a towel around her body and another one around her hair. ?Greg will not be in the delivery room with me.?

?How do you know??

She laughed again. ?Gil?get dressed. My water broke?I think my backache and muscle cramps might be labor pains.? He remained in one spot. She said, ?Who knew? Now get dressed?I don?t want to have to drive myself.?

Sara did wake Greg, asking him to drive her mother to the hospital later. He was out of bed and dressing in seconds. ?What else can I do? Where is Grissom? Should you have come upstairs? Shouldn?t you be sitting?resting? I don?t know anything about babies!?

Laughter came again as she leaned against the door and breathed slowly several times. Greg watched with open mouth.

?I?m fine, Greg. Get Grissom to the car. I think he?s in shock.?

"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #39 on: June 14, 2009, 04:13:47 PM »
great its time for baby Grissom to arrive ,more soon please , :D

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #40 on: June 14, 2009, 08:39:10 PM »
Great chapter!

Anxiously waiting on the arrival of baby Grissom

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #41 on: June 15, 2009, 02:52:25 AM »
Just caught up

great chapters

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« Reply #42 on: June 15, 2009, 07:01:56 AM »
Can just imagine Greg's face.  Great update.

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« Reply #43 on: June 15, 2009, 07:58:33 AM »
Baby Grissom gets to met Uncle Greg, wonderful.

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« Reply #44 on: June 15, 2009, 12:20:25 PM »
In the matter of how babies are born, Sara was fortunate. Her pelvic passage was made for childbirth, and with a little effort and pain quickly forgotten, her first child was delivered. She had never given much thought to motherhood yet over the past months, she had grown to realize the instinct for caring for others included her child.

As for the baby?s father, a man who had never held a newborn child until he held his own, he cried more tears than his wife as he held the pink infant and soothed her infant cries. Sara, as many new mother?s, went from tears to smiles in seconds; her fingers traced along a dark eyebrow, lifted a tiny, downy curl of hair, and, when the baby?s delicate mouth turned downward and her chin trembled, Sara cuddled her little girl against her breast and whispered words of an old song in a little ear.

?She looks like her mother,? one nurse said.

?Yes,? said another, ?but she has her father?s heart.?

Greg had entertained the small group of women who waited patiently and quietly for news of the delivery. Even nurses and visitors were drawn into the circle of listeners as he told stories of Las Vegas. Everyone knew about Vegas and laughed and shook their heads at recaptured history, some truthful, some imagined and some unbelievable. But when the man in baggy pants and a blue and white shirt appeared at the door of the waiting room, all eyes turned to his?the grin of new parenthood slapped across his face said more than his first words.

?She?s here!?

Hours later, Greg arrived with enough gadgets to launch a rocket but all he had to do was link a hospital room to a crime lab. Easy, he said, and within minutes, a tiny camera captured dark hair, pulled back and sent the first close-up of Elizabeth Grissom to her audience in Las Vegas. The parents heard applause before they saw the faces of friends grouped around a screen.

?Ahh?she?s beautiful!? Said one of the men.

?She looks like Sara,? said another.

?She?s adorable,? came from one of the women.

?How?s Mom?? asked one.

?How?s Dad?? was followed by laughter.

As if on cue, the baby, just a few hours old, opened her eyes for the camera, giving a dazed, unfocused stare into the lens. Those watching took amazed double-takes into blue eyes they recognized?the intense blue of a desert sky were those of her father.

Someone said, ?She has Grissom?s eyes!?

The conversation that followed was one of beautiful babies, how Greg managed to arrive in time for the birth, and dozens of other topics before someone realized mother and baby had drifted to sleep.

Catherine asked the last question, ?Will you call her Elizabeth??

Grissom?s finger was softly stroking the baby?s cheek when he answered. ?She?s Bizzy?our little Bizzy Bee,? and with that, most people forgot she had been named Elizabeth.

Greg proved to be a surprising, helpful houseguest?he stayed with Hank at night and drove Sara?s mother to the hospital each day. After the new parents and Bizzy came home, he disappeared and returned with food. He did not intrude on privacy yet he got up in the middle of the night and sat with Sara as she nursed and rocked her baby and Grissom dozed beside them. While Sara slept and the baby was rocked by her dad, Greg talked to Grissom.

During his last night with them, he prepared dinner and held Bizzy while Sara and Grissom ate.

?You?re a good cook, Greg,? said Grissom. ?I guess I never realized just how good?this is almost as delicious as Sara?s lasagna.?

Sara and Greg shot a glance at each other. ?Where do you think I got the recipe?? Greg asked.

Sara laughed. ?Confession time, Gil. I learned how to cook from Greg!?

Their laughter caused a stirring from the infant and Sara reached for the baby. ?Before you go, Greg, we want to talk with you about something,? she said.

Grissom pushed food in his direction, saying, ?We want to name you as guardian to Bizzy?should the day come when she needs one.?

Greg?s fork stopped in mid-path to his mouth. ?Guardian? For?me?? His eyes were wide with surprise.

Sara smiled. ?Greg, you?ve always been like a brother to me. Both of us realize how important it is to name a guardian?just in case.? All he could do was nod his head to agree.

For Grissom, from the moment he knew he would be a father, and even more so after his daughter was born, his philosophy and thinking about much of life changed. He never thought he would be so openly and shamelessly proud to be a father?and it did not wear off. He found a sling carrier similar to what they had seen while traveling and carried the baby with him, often having to hurry to return to Sara when hungry protests signaled feeding time.

?She?s smart, Sara.?

Sara kissed the top of Grissom?s head and combed a hand through his hair. ?She?s two months old, Gil.?

Both parents believed in their own way their child was a gift, a miracle, a surprise to began the next segment of their lives. An easy delivery was a sign of her life?she slept well, smiled quickly, soon learning that a gurgle or grunt would bring the faces of those who provided care. She seldom cried; she rarely had a need to be angry or frustrated. The good natured personality of Sara?s firstborn meant her parents thought all babies were like this.

Bizzy would sleep for hours after visiting their neighbors, a long walk through a field of flowers, a quick check of beehives and hunger satisfied. Sara stepped from the shower to find Grissom holding a towel. She had planned this?what she wanted to say, what she wanted to do, but, as with many other times, he already knew.

As much as Grissom loved his daughter in the way of a father, he never grew tired of loving his wife. Every hour with Sara meant he loved her more?from a simple gesture, a kiss, a particular way of playing, how she gave herself to him, to their daughter. He was insatiable, inquisitive, and absolutely ready for anything this woman might wish of him.

He kissed her hair, her forehead, pulling her body to his. ?Sara,? he whispered, ?do you know how much I love you, how much you?ve always meant to me? Because of you, I have learned to love. It is because of you that my heart has not dried up.?

Sara smiled, resting her head on his shoulder. ?Once you said you cared about me, Gil. That day, I knew?you could, you did love me because you said you cared. Half my life, it seems, I spent trying to get you to know you loved me?and now, you give me everything.?

Grissom would never refuse her request. She had no need to explain?she wanted a sister or a brother for their child; Grissom loved his daughter and he would love a second child. His smiled found its way to her lips; the towel dropped somewhere between bathroom and bed. His hands warmed against her body as fingers found intimate areas known only to lovers. She responded?her passion had heightened after the birth of her daughter?with feathery touches that made him groan. She could feel him pressed against her, aching with desire. His lips on her skin, the smell of her body, the stimulation provide by intimate contact brought both into the sparkling whirlpool of sensuous waves, rushing, tumbling, rolling and swelling as the pull of love surged within each.

Several months later?Sara unwrapped the pencil sized instrument and followed instructions. The small area immediately changed to positive. She smiled. She heard Grissom talking in his office?to his daughter, planning a day for the two of them. She knew he thought this child was the smartest human being on the planet. She grinned as she slipped an arm into her jacket. Their life could only get more?interesting.

A/N: Thanks for reading our bit of fiction! We have another in progress, but it will be several weeks before it is ready to post!
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)