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Putting Senses to Order
« on: June 08, 2009, 04:46:56 PM »
This one takes place shortly after our fav couple get married--sort of an adventure to two beautiful places--enjoy!

?I go to nature to be soothed and healed and to have my senses put to order.?  Sara twisted the narrow gold bracelet as she read the John Burroughs quote. She thought it ideal in its simplicity; its message appropriate for her and the perfect gift from the man she loved.

She leaned forward, slowly, to slide the window shade up enough to see sunlight in the east. She pressed her head against the window and looked below?snow covered mountains in miniature. She tried to remember world geography; the Alps, perhaps. A coastline came into her view. This must be Italy, she thought.

Grissom had insisted on this trip. His father had taken his mother to Venice on their honeymoon and he remembered a hundred references to that trip made during breakfast, or while looking at black and white photographs, or when watching certain movies.

?And, since we are already half-way around the globe, let?s see the pyramids?up close and in person!?

She had already lost what sensibilities she had weeks ago when she turned to find him standing in the Costa Rican rainforest. Along with a dozen other happenings, she agreed. She was happy; her life was a whirlwind, but in its center was her husband, her lover, her best friend and companion and he was beside her.

Her seatmate groaned and rubbed his nose. She smiled as she gently placed his pillow underneath his head.

?I?m awake,? he said. He took her hand and held it against his cheek. ?Are we there yet??

?Not quite.?

Sara had been in a dream world for weeks?a perpetual state of disbelief from the moment she turned to see him?sweaty, holding his breath, momentary uncertainty on his face. They had seldom been apart since that day. Weeks in Costa Rica as volunteers had ended when she realized she was pregnant. They were married among their friends. She smiled as she felt his thumb against the palm of her hand. How many times had the touch of his hand soothed her troubled thoughts?

Today, she was not troubled. If anything, her excitement kept her from sleep. The business class seats had stretched to a comfortable recliner and she did sleep, just not as quickly nor as soundly as her husband. She leaned against his shoulder.

?Did you sleep?? He asked as he shifted an arm to wrap around her shoulders.

?I did. I really need the bathroom now.?

With his eyes closed, he found her seatbelt and said, ?Would you bring me a coffee, Mrs. Grissom??

Mrs. Grissom. Would she ever become accustomed to that name? Last night the flight attendant had said her name as she confirmed the vegetarian meal. Grissom had laughed at the look on her face. She patted the bulge at her waistline as she checked her face in the small bathroom mirror. Grissom insisted she carry identification and insurance cards on her person ?at all times? on this trip. She tucked the pouch behind her belt.

Within the hour, breakfast was served and passengers were preparing for landing. Sara kept her face against the window.

?There it is,? she said just as the plane banked for landing giving passengers their first view of the city built on water. The Dolomite Mountains framed the distant horizon. She felt his hand on her back. ?It?s already beautiful. Thank you.? She kissed him as the announcement came to ?straighten seat backs? followed by the flurry of activities set in motion by those words.

They walked off the plane with their bags and breezed through customs, guarded by solemn officials in immaculate uniforms. They found the airport boat and, after showing the agent the name of their hotel, Grissom quoted Henry James.

?Venice is best approached by sea.?

The passenger boat, much like a bus, moved quickly, and just as millions before, the two gazed at the world?s truly unique city.  The absolute absence of cars and trucks, the streets of water, the magnificent buildings?Sara pointed at a familiar delivery logo painted on a brown boat. At the second stop, the boat?s driver pointed to them, and placed luggage on the dock, he left as quickly as they had arrived.

?Left, our hotel is left.?

Sara grabbed her bag, unquestioning Grissom?s directions. The boat ride, the long flight, the lack of sleep made her dizzy and completely willing to do as he said. He sensed her discomfort and reached for her bag, leaving her with a rolling suitcase.

?I got this one.?

His directions were dead-on. ?Thanks to Google and GPS,? he said as a door was opened by a hotel employee who immediately took their bags, their names, and walked with them to the desk. In minutes, they were given key cards and directions, and the same man placed their suitcases on a cart, and in an Italian English mix of words, they knew to follow him.

The smallest of elevators took them up three floors in this palazzo turned hotel to a long narrow hall. When the room door was opened, the two men stood to one side for Sara to enter. She saw pale yellow walls and shuttered windows before a sudden lightheadedness overcame her normal composure. She stumbled and pitched forward as darkness closed around her.
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2009, 08:41:16 PM »
Great start!

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 08:00:17 AM »
Great start.  "Are we there yet?" Gil sound like a little boy.


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« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2009, 11:51:28 AM »
great start! keep writing!  :)

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2009, 11:35:37 AM »
Grissom caught her before she fell; the hotel employee?s quick assistance helped get her to the bed. Rapid Italian spoken on the phone brought a woman to the room just after Sara?s eyes fluttered open with surprise.

?Did I faint?? She asked.

?You did.? Grissom answered as the woman expertly took her pulse and placed a cool hand against her face. A blood pressure monitor beeped and the woman removed the cuff.

The woman asked several questions with both providing answers. She smiled at one of Sara?s answers and left as quickly as she had arrived, promising a return in minutes.

?I can?t believe I fainted.?

Grissom chuckled. ?At least you waited until you were in the room. Scared me to death.?

Sara placed her feet on the floor. ?Excitement of getting here. The room is beautiful.? She smiled as he helped her to stand and kept a hand on her as she explored the room. ?This is beautiful.? She opened shutters to find a balcony large enough for two chairs and two people, if they stood very close, overlooking a small tree shaded, flower filled courtyard.

Returning to the room when they heard a quiet knock, the woman had returned with a tray of food.

?It is for Mrs. Grissom. Often our guests need time to adjust after traveling. Food helps.? She brought fruit, juices, bread and cheese on the tray. ?Rest before going out to enjoy our city.? She handed Sara a card. ?A clinic with good doctors should you need one?several speak English.?

Sara ate almost all the food before declaring she felt better. ?I?m ready to take on Venice.?

Grissom had stretched on the bed. ?We are going to sleep?just a short while?before going out. And I really need a shower,? he said as he fluffed a pillow.

Within minutes, both were standing in the shower; his excuse was ?you might faint again.? She laughed, knowing neither needed an excuse. Hands, soap, warm water, lips on wet skin combined to have the desired effect on both. Grissom backed her against the tiled wall bringing her leg around his hip, finding a place for his hand to hold her against his thigh. His mouth tasted her delicate scent as he heard her quiet laugh. She was warm, wet, incredibly snug against him.

?Bed,? he heard her say. ?More room in bed.?

He needed no more room, but somehow one managed to turn off the water, a towel was wrapped around both, and in a tumbling dance they got to the bed with the same explorations, caresses, lips on skin, teasing searches which had started in the shower.

Sara managed to tangle legs around his and roll above him, placing light kisses across his chest, to his chin, to his mouth where wispy, feathery delicate lips became forceful, entering his mouth with her tongue, sucking his into hers. Her hands moved in nimble graceful motions, along his chest to his groin. When she traced a line along his thigh, brushing a weightless thumb along his pulsing body, he heard a deep giggle.

His hands had not been idle. He knew she was moist, warm, ready for him and in one motion, he was on top of her?searching, finding what he had initiated in the shower. The same wonderful discovery of men for thousands of years, this woman was made for him, in the secure, precision fit of two parts made for each other. Their love making was the hurried demand of postponed passion; a leisurely generous time would come later.

And it brought sleep to both; deep, dreamless rest needed to adjust to time changes and a new environment. For two people who had spent most of their lives sleeping alone, they slept as one. A shift of one moved the other in symmetry of legs curled and bent together, an arm wrapped around a chest, a hand enclosed another. From above, unseen except by a few lazy flies, their sleep was a slow dance of unfettered emotions.

Sara woke first and was content to remain within Grissom?s arms, against his shoulder in a place she claimed as her own. Her hand was held against his chest, captured, content, comfortable.

The mobius bracelet reflected late afternoon light. He had given her what she needed, tenfold, without demands, without restrictions. He left his career, his network of colleagues, his support?even his dog, his home, to find her. They had returned, not to the home they had made in the desert, but returned to do ?things? he said, before beginning a new life.

The lawyers were first. Sara never imagined the steady accumulation of wealth that could occur when one lived within modest means as Grissom had saved and invested from an early age. Before leaving Vegas, he had paperwork completed for joint ownership?everything he owned he shared with her with a signature. She protested to no avail.

In the time they had lived together, she had paid few bills; Grissom had insisted she save her money ?for a rainy day?. When that day came, she had enough?not to live expensively, but to live.

?We are going long term,? he said. ?Sign the papers.?

At the bottom of the stack of papers was a photograph of a house that looked vaguely familiar. Sara picked it up.

?It?s the house near your mother. If you want it, we can buy it. Have it updated, painted, while we travel.?

She smiled that day, and everyday following, even when Grissom talked her into a wedding of sorts, in front of friends. He gave her the bracelet that night. She moved her fingers against his chest; he stirred, one eye opened.

?We are in one of the most beautiful places in the world and we are sleeping,? she said.

They dressed, carefully and simply, to join off-season crowds to cross canal bridges and walk narrow sidewalks and marvel at the lack of motor vehicles. They checked posted menus at small cafes and stopped in front of shop windows to point out displays of the unfamiliar or expensive glassware or tacky tourist trinkets. Their map set a path through ancient city squares, beside markets and old churches, until, suddenly, and with no warning, a passageway opened to the city?s greatest tourist attraction.
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 02:43:06 PM »
still great, keep writing!
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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 08:13:06 PM »
Great chapter!

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 08:48:33 PM »
The immense paved square, the red brick clock tower, the sparkling dome of the cathedral caused the couple to stop and quickly step to one side of traffic as dozens of people passed in and out of St. Mark?s Square.

As millions of other tourists had done in their footsteps, the scene before them took their breath. What had been seen and studied in pages of travel books became majestically larger than life. The white fa?ade of the church dominated the square, and in the afternoon sun, glittered in brilliant whiteness. Along three sides of the square, colonnaded arcades decorated historic buildings that posed as dignified servants waiting to be called into action.

Sunlight and shadows created a patchwork of light and shade among chairs and tables, pigeons and people. They slowly walked the length of the square, listening to music?a waltz, an Italian ballad, a popular hit. In a conversation of explanation, Grissom related the history of the place, the kings, the wealth, the ultimate defeat and becoming part of Italy?but no where else had a city survived surrounded by water; streets became canals, boats became major transportation.

They stood in line for a cathedral tour and afterwards walked across a bridge named for the sound made as prisoners took a last look at freedom. Grissom quoted Lord Byron, ?I stood in Venice, on the Bridge of Sighs, a palace and a prison on each hand.?

They ate in a small caf?, away from touristy spots. Sara found a vegetarian meal of fresh peppers, tomatoes, squash, eggplant, and pasta. Grissom ordered the local specialties with the comfortable ability of a native, speaking Italian that made the waiter smile.

The long walk back to their hotel in air made damp by sea breezes brought about a renewed drive to sink into the comfort of a warm bed. In their absence, the room had been visited and transformed from the sun filled chamber of opened luggage and scattered clothes to one of rest and quiet. One lamp provided a circle of light, shoes had been paired and lined along the closet floor, clothing was on hangers, and the tangled sheets had been replaced and turned down.

Their first day in the city built on a hundred islands set a pattern for the following days. Waking as light came to the courtyard, reaching for each other, teasing as they came awake, making slow love as whispered words and soft laughter passed between them.  Dressing and breakfast often took two hours, not because they had difficulty selecting what to wear or what to eat, but because there was time. No expectations, no clocks, no deadlines.

The exotic city waited as it had done for hundreds of years. And as the long-ago Europeans and Asians had found the good life in Venice, Sara and Grissom found good food, music, palaces, and time to be together.

Sara made him leave the GPS device in their room, finding a certain adventurous spirit in getting lost, retracing steps and entering a familiar square.

?Piazza,? she said, ?We sound more Italian!? and they both burst into a fit of laughter. Late afternoon into early night, they wandered back to St. Mark?s?Piazza San Marco?to people watch in the place Napoleon called ?the drawing room of Europe.?

Three days passed before they ventured from tourist maps and found hidden alleyways and deserted canals that provided a keyhole glimpse into private lives of Venetians. They found small museums, less known, but filled with art, paintings, glass, jewels, statuary, and other pieces of history of an old world superpower.

Twice Grissom paid a generous amount of money for private tours in a gondola?he loved the isolation of moving along quiet canal streets surrounded by water lapping against the boat as the gondolier realized the couple did not desire endless chatter about the city. Grissom loved the nearness of Sara as they sat together and she pointed out tiny ferns in cracks of buildings, or massive waves of pink and purple flowers cascading from empty balconies.

They watched as an old man and woman paddled a boat smaller than the gondola to a floating market where the woman, frail but steady, stood in the boat and pointed to vegetables she wanted to buy.

?Amazing,? Sara said. ?To live without a car?no traffic lights?no fatalities.?

Grissom chuckled as a larger boat eased by, engines throttled to prevent wake. ?True, but imagine trying to sort out a crash between boats.?

The young gondolier?they sought him for the second time and explained they wanted to be taken on another, different tour?decided they were old lovers, reconnecting after a long separation. Grissom showed the man an old photograph of his parents standing on a small foot bridge. Sara rested her head on Grissom shoulder as they glided through night time Venice, lights casting glitter on dark water.

?It is romantic?relaxing?so very touristy,? Sara said with a laugh.

?But nothing like Vegas.?

They both laughed and listened to the city sounds as the boat sailed past dark buildings and silhouettes on bridges. The long shiny boat turned into smaller and smaller canals until the gondolier pointed to a small ornate bridge ahead.

?It is the bridge, sir!? He grinned as he maneuvered the boat to the sidewalk and, in the growing darkness; he offered a hand to Sara as she stepped out. Grissom set his camera and moved to stand beside Sara after handing it to the man.

A dozen photographs were taken of the couple as the three laughed and consulted the old photograph again to get an identical pose. The quiet, cool night, letting the young man take his time as he returned them to their destination, awoke other senses and needs in Sara and Grissom. They hurried past elegantly dressed locals, tired tourists, home-bound shopkeepers and waiters serving late night patrons to find privacy provided by a closed door.
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 10:48:26 PM »
Great chapter!

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 08:25:40 AM »
Great update.  Love your descriptions.

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 08:59:45 AM »
Away from the computer a couple of days and look what I missed! Welcome back girls.  This is a wonderful story, I was in Venice Oct 07 and this brought back beautiful memories. Look forward to the next update.

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« Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 10:10:18 AM »
Grissom watched as Sara opened the shutters to the small balcony. Each night they sat in darkness and listened to the sounds coming from neighboring windows and balconies?laughter, muted conversations, music, singing?someone had a beautiful voice that carried into the courtyard and seemed to quiet all other sounds. Tonight, she returned to him, clicking off the lamp to plunge the room in near darkness.

Cool sheets, soft to their skin, wrapped them in a white cocoon. He explored her familiar body with fingertips that had already imprinted every inch of her in his brain. His nose filled with her fragrance?slightly salty, the smell of clean water, a faint citrus aroma, and that scent of sex as her desires became evident.

Grissom played. She teased. He whispered words that brought a raspy giggle. His fingers moved between her thighs, finding a warm welcome. Her hands were busy with light touches, stroking, almost driving him to distraction.

When he heard her throaty laugh, he lifted his head and met her eyes, moving to kiss her lips.

?And what delights you, Mrs. Grissom??

?You,? she whispered. Her hand moved and her warm fingertips touched him in an intimate area, caressing, surrounding him with pleasure. She sensed his need and slipped her fingers around his firmness, guiding him to a place he needed no effort to find.

?Yes,? he murmured against her ear as he released his breath.

She said his name, ?Gil?, as he moved into her, knowing he liked the sound of his name on her lips.

The seductive energy that always seemed to circulate around them when they were together intensified. She felt the strength in his hands as he wrapped them gently around her back and hips. He pulled her closer as his mouth met hers. She thought she knew his kisses well enough by now not to be surprised at her own response, but she was always wrong. She tried to control the rush of hot excitement and the deep ache that threatened to explode inside her body.

She failed.

The intimacy of their bed, the sea scented breeze, the soft sheets, and his hands?always his hands?unlocked hidden passion. They were free, no past, no future, no threat of interruption with a telephone call from work, no concern of discovery of their secret. Sara heard Grissom?s low, husky groan and his arms tightened around her as his fingertips found the place against her chest where her breast rose?an erotic touch that made her gasp every time it occurred. She felt him smile against her lips.

One hand slipped beneath her backside, pulling her closer to his own hips, touching her with such intimacy that she felt a great coiling tension within the core of her body. She dug fingernails into his shoulders.

?I can not stand it,? she whispered.

?Come, let me feel you,? he said. He moved his hand against the sacred, feminine place of pleasure as the gathering storm within her unleashed dazzling waves of consciousness and she was sucked into a whirlpool of desire. She would have cried out with pleasure but Grissom?s mouth covered hers in a heavy, sensitive kiss. All of her senses reacted to this physical connection, flooding, infusing their space with breathtaking intimacy.

When he climaxed, Sara felt the fire inside him leap and roar before realizing the beginnings of a low rumble in his chest. Quickly, she managed to cover Grissom?s mouth with her own as she heard and felt the muffled growl of masculine satisfaction.

Some time later, she stirred in his arms. Grissom, who was reclining against pillows piled against the headboard, had the look of a well satiated lion after a successful hunt. He reached for a water carafe, drinking from it rather than from the glass provided.

She giggled?the light laughter bringing a smile to his face. She lay completely nude against the sheets, knees crossed and a foot swinging freely. His response was to hold the bottle above her mouth.

?Trust me?? He asked as he tilted the container above her head. She opened her mouth as he expertly, and true to target, filled her mouth with water. He moved beside her, resting a hand on her belly. ?We should have a baby book?a pregnancy book. I know little about this.? His fingers gently stroked her skin in small circles.

Sara had quickly read two books?the extent of her knowledge came from those pages. Her doctor had assured her that travel in early pregnancy seldom caused problems that would not have occurred at home.

She asked, ?Girl or boy?? Knowing this had already been determined and knowing what his answer would be.

His eyebrow lifted. ?Girl, definitely.? This conversation had been on-going since the surprise discovery of her pregnancy. Grissom knew they needed a daughter?one who would resemble her mother, a girl to keep her company in old age, long after he was gone. He knew too well how sons were; absent for long periods, trouble-makers, forgetful, showing up for visits that were never long enough. He knew sons, and he hoped this tiny developing form was female.

?I want a little Gilbert.? She chuckled as she said his full name, adding, ?Gilbert, Junior, or can I call him Gil Two??

A grumble emerged as his hand wrapped around her waist. ?A boy will not be Gilbert, dear. Besides, we are having a girl?a Rochelle, or Camille, or Laura?after your mom.?

Sara rolled against him, wrapping arms around him as she nestled her head against his shoulder. ?I am having a hard time believing I?m really knocked up. That we actually are married, that we are in Venice?no more Vegas.?

Grissom kissed her, a gentle caress of his lips against her hair. ?Do you have any idea how long I?ve imagined being with you like this??

A sigh came from deep in her chest. ?Yes.? She stayed within his arms and drifted into sleep as she felt his thumb making small circles against her skin?
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 03:14:21 PM »
read on other site.

Great as always

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 04:12:05 PM »
Great chapter

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Re: Putting Senses to Order
« Reply #14 on: June 10, 2009, 05:52:52 PM »
another great couple of chapters!
keep writing

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