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trishj

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CSI - The Next Generation
« on: May 11, 2009, 05:24:45 PM »
Here is my idea for my next story.  I thought I would post a preview with some of the details of the story and get opinions before I work more on it.  New charters will be added as the story progresses.  The title may change, I am not sure about that yet.   Please leave comments and opinions so I know how you, as readers, feel about this type of story,  Thanks Tricia.   

Gil and Sara have been together a lot longer then on the TV show - they have to be to make my story work  lol. 
They have two children, a boy named Ryan who is now 22 and a daughter, Elizabeth who is 20.

Ryan is a lot like his dad, he loves bugs and while studying entomology at  WLVU during the day he works as a CSI on graves.  He and Warrick and Catherine?s daughter, Tya have been going together since high school. 

Elizabeth (Beth to everyone but dad who still calls her Ladybug) is Sara cloned.  Her love for animals has lead her to a position as a CSI also but a different kind.  She is part of a Mobile Animal Crime Scene Investigation team.  It is brand new in the state of Nevada. Beth sort of has Mom?s idea about men (well pre Gil anyway) that they are more of a hindrance then a help - this too will change.

Gil has retired and teaches, he is also in the process of writing a book on  forensic entomology.

Sara is still on graves and is helping Gil with his book.

Catherine has taken Ecklie?s job - am not sure why he left yet.

Nick and Sophia married and have a son, Austin 21 who has fallowed moms footsteps and became a police officer.  Their daughter, Kristen, is a senior in high school.   Sophia took Jim?s job when he retired and Nick took Gil?s.

Warrick and Greg still work graves.

Wendy and David Hodges married and have a son, Robert.  He is a freshman in high school.

Greg wrote his book on old Vegas and story?s not know to a lot of people.  Lilly co-wrote it with him.  (Nothing like getting first hand information.)

The story will mainly be about the children but I will surely toss in the parents too.  (GSR always, no matter how old they get.)

 


 

GSRLOVER34

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #1 on: May 11, 2009, 06:49:36 PM »
IT SOUNDS GREAT. GET STARTED ON IT ASAP!

Billyjorja

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2009, 06:44:42 AM »
Agree with my friend GSRLOVER34

GSR always, no matter how old they get - of course.

Trish

trishj

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CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2009, 06:57:34 PM »
Chapter 1

Gil was sitting at his desk deep in thought when his son came down the stairs.
 ?Dad I was wondering if I could barrow that book by Dr. Stiller?  There is something about this case that has bugging me.?  Then he laughed, ?No pun intended.?
 Gil laughed also.  ?That was what I was thinking about.  Your Mom and I were talking about it.  Grab the book and bring it here maybe I can help.?
 Gil had retired form the lab a while ago but every so once in a while a case comes by that tweaks his interest, this was one of them.
 Sara was in the kitchen finishing dinner when she heard her sons voice.  She looked in the den and seen father and son working together.
  She smiled, Ryan was his father.  The same mannerisms, the same likes and dislikes and he had his dads eyes.
 Those deep blue bedroom eyes, as she had often told Gil.  It was no wonder the girls could not keep their hands off him. 
But he only had eyes for  Tya Lacy Brown.  Tya was Warrick and Catherine?s girl.  She had a permit copper tan and inherited her fathers green eyes, her hair was black and fell just below her shoulders in perfect waves, like her mother.
  Ryan was a son any parent would be proud to have.  Despite the fact that he was born with his fathers hearing loss.  (He had his cochlear implant when he was 9 months old.)
 He graduated valedictorian from high school and is carrying a 4.0 Grade Point Average in his studies at WLVU.
 This did not surprise his parents, his IQ was 135. 
Gil and Ryan pondered over the book as Sara walked in the den.  ?All that information is on the computer you know,? she said. 
At the same time they both said, ?I know.  But I would rather read it in from a book.?  Sara laughed.
  ?You have to lean into a computer,? Gil said.  ?I would rather read from a comfortable position, leaning back,? Ryan finished his father?s thought.
 ?It is a Papaipema Seciosissima,? Ryan said.  ?A what?? Sara said.  ?A Regal Fern Borer,? Gil said, ?Found only in South America.?
 ?So if it found it?s way into our victims suitcase,? Sara said.  ?Our victim has been in South America,? Gil said, ?Right in this area,? he said pointing to an area on the map.?
 ?That should help ID him,? Ryan said, ?I will call Sophia.? 
?Time to eat,? she told them.  ?As soon as I make this call,? Ryan said.  ?Thanks Dad.? 
Gil stood and put his arm around Sara?s waist as they walked to the dinning room.
 ?Did not hear you come in, Ladybug,? Gil said to their daughter Elizabeth.  ?Just got here,? she said kissing his cheek.  ?Wash up, dinner is ready,? Sara told her.
 If Ryan was Gil then Beth was Sara.  Gil often joked that he did not father Beth, Sara just cloned her. 
?Mom, I asked Dr. Merck to stop by tomorrow, is that ok??  ?Of course,? she said.  Dr. Melinda Merck is the nations premier forensic veterinarian and animal CSI and someone Sara longed to meet.
 She was in Vegas teaching a few classes about animal forensics.
 That was Beth?s calling, since she was a child animals have been her life.
  When she found out that there was a branch of forensic that dealt with animals and when the animal CSI branch was started in Vegas she was the first one to apply.
 Like her brother she graduated valedictorian from her class.  Ryan would joke with her saying he was smarter then she, her IQ was only 130.
 Over dinner Beth talked about Dr. Merck and the Mobile Animal Crime Scene Investigation Unit. 
Gil looked at his daughter and smiled.
 Later that evening Gil and Sara were laying in bed, she was cuddled in his arms. 
?We are so lucky,? Sara said.  She was referring to the children.
 ?I am,? he said kissing her.  His hand found those places on her body that still sent shivers through her.  There love was still as passionate as it had always been.
 They finished satisfying the needs of their love and fell asleep in each others arms.   
         


 

GSRLOVER34

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2009, 08:05:31 PM »
Great chapter!

It's great that they can still satisfy one another.  ;) :-*

Billyjorja

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2009, 06:02:00 AM »
 ;) ;)  Age is no barrier to satisfaction!!!!!!!!!

trishj

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CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #6 on: May 13, 2009, 10:53:15 AM »
Chapter 2

With the information that Ryan had given Sophia and a little more leg work the victim was IDed.
   With that part of it done they had to find the person who had slit his throat.
  Beth brought Dr. Merck to the house for dinner, with her love for animals Sara had wanted to meet her for a while.
  Dr. Merck told Sara all about the van and what can be done with it.
 ?The Mobile Animal CSI Unit,? Dr. Merck said, ?will allow us to process any suspected crime scene more quickly and more efficiently. Because it be working on-site, rather than transporting animals and other evidence, this will reduce the stress placed on the animals. It will also provide for a proven chain of custody, ensuring the integrity of evidence.?
 ?What kind of a van is it?? Gil had asked.
 ?It is a Ford E-450 customized by La Boit Inc.,? Isaac Mathews said.
 Isaac was the driver of the van.
 Sara, Beth, Dr. Merck and Isaac talked about the van and the advantage it will to the LVPD and the Crime Lab.
 Gil noticed something that Sara had not, Beth could not take her eyes off Isaac.  He smiled as he remembered those looks between him and Sara.
  Ryan came in the living room, ?What?s for dinner??
 It was then that Sara had noticed the time.
  ?I am so sorry,? she said, ?I ask you to dinner and then get talking and forget all about it.?
 Gil walked up behind Sara and kissed her cheek, ?Not to worry love.  I have taken care of it.  Dinner is on the patio.?
 Gil had thrown some stakes and veggie burgers on the grill and there was some salad left over form yesterday.
 Sara smiled, ?Now you know why I keep him.?
 ?Because he can cook?? Ryan said.
 Sara looked into her husbands eyes, ?No.  Because he is what is missing in me, he makes me complete.?
 Beth smiled at her parents, she could see the love in their eyes.
 ?That is the kind of love I want,? she said to herself.
 The conversation continued over dinner when Ryan said, ?Dad I need to talk to you.?
 Gil excused himself and he and Ryan took Hank out for a run.
 ?Dad, I want to ask Tya to marry me,? he said after he was out of earshot of the others.
 Gil smiled, he knew this day was coming, he was just not sure when. 
?Sounds like a good idea,? he said. 
?Well there is a problem,? Ryan said. 
?Certainly not Warrick and Catherine,? Gil said. 
?No,? Ryan answered.  ?We can?t afford our own place yet and Rick said their place is not - well let?s just say he said the walls in his house are to thin and there are just some noises he can live the rest of his life without hearing.? 
Gil laughed.  ?Let me talk to your Mom.  I think we can work something out.?
 Gil called Hank, then to his son he said, ?Come with me.?
 They went to his and Sara?s room.
 Gil opened a jewelry box inside the box was a ring box. 
?This belonged to my  great grandfather,? Gil told him.  ?Each Grissom male has given it to his lady to wear.  Then on their wedding day this ring is replaced by the wedding band and but someplace safe for the next generation  Grissom boy.  It is now yours.?  ?Thanks Dad,? Ryan said.
 Gil looked at him and smirked, ?Do we need a ?birds and bees? talk??  Ryan blushed, ?Just because we have not done it dose not mean I don?t know how to.  Anyway, we had that talk a long time ago.?
 Ryan told Gil he intended to ask her on Friday while they are out to dinner.
 ?Good,? Gil said, ?Gives me a chance to take to your mother.?
 Later that night Gil and Sara were laying on their bed, Sara had found her comfy place.
 ?What did Ryan need to talk to you about?? she asked.  Gil told her about his talk with Ryan, then he told her about Ryan?s problem.
 Sara thought for a while, ?We can one of two things,? she said.  ?We can either help them get a place of their own or we can fix up the basement and they can stay there.? 
Gil laughed, ?The basement IS completely insulated and sound proof.?
 Sara smiled, ?I think we should let them decided what they would rather do.? 
?I have another tidbit of news for you,? he said.
 He then told her about the way Beth was looking at Isaac.  Sara sat up and looked at him, ?Beth?  In love??  ?It can happen,? Gil said.
 ?I mean how many people thought you would never find love and happiness.?  Sara kissed him passionately, ?And I did and still do,? she said.
 ?Mr. Grissom if you don?t stop that we might never get to sleep,? she told him as his hands found those private places that arouse her.  He looked into her eyes, ?Do you want me to stop??  ?Never,? she whispered.
  After they had finished making love and Sara was once more back in her comfy place Gil smiled.  "It is a good thing our room is sound proof."           
   
         


 

GSRLOVER34

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #7 on: May 13, 2009, 01:16:19 PM »
Great chapter!

So glad they make sound proof rooms.  ;) :-* :D

Billyjorja

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #8 on: May 14, 2009, 05:39:48 AM »
Lovely chapter.

What a great idea with the ring.

trishj

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CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #9 on: May 15, 2009, 01:17:31 AM »
Chapter 3

The next morning Gil and Sara were talking to Ryan.
  Gil told him that Ryan and Tya were welcome to stay in the basement.
  ?It will not take much to fix it up,? Gil said.  ?It is plenty big enough to make into a small efficiency,? Sara said, ?We can call Russ I am sure he can help us.?
 Ryan hugged his mother, ?Thanks Mom.  Thanks Dad.  That will be one less thing for us to worry about.? 
He grabbed his text books and headed out the door.
  Beth came running down the stairs, ?Breakfast?? Sara asked her daughter.
  ?No time Mom,? she said grabbing a cereal bar and a container of orange juice.
  ?I am meeting Isaac at the lab.?
 She kisses her father and took off out the door waving at them.
 ?I think I need to talk to this Isaac fella,? Gil said to Sara.  Sara kissed his cheek as she cleared the table, ?Daddy?s little girl has another man in her life and daddy is jealous.?
  ?Not jealous,? Gil said, ?I just don?t want her hurt.?  Sara leaned close to his ear and whispered, ?Jealous.? 
Gil pulled her into his lap and kissed her, ?When was the last time I told you I love you??
 ?I believe it was last night.  I seem to remember those words coming out of your mouth between the pants and groans of pure pleasure.?
 She kissed him and finished clearing the table. 
Gil stood and wrapped his arms around her waist.  ?Kids are gone ? you are off,? he said as he kissed her neck. 
He knew from the years they spent together that this was the one thing she could not resist.
  ?You are playing dirty, Mr. Grissom,? she said pushing herself closer to him.
 He ran his hand under her pajama top and cupped her breast, ?Is it working??  She did not answer, she just looked into his eyes and headed for the bedroom.  He smiled, all these years together and words were still not needed between them.
 He fallowed his wife to their room.
 Beth meant Isaac in the parking lot.  ?Morning,? he said.  She smiled.  He handed her a cup of coffee, ?I took the liberty, hope you don?t mind.?  She took it and thanked him.
 ?So - Let me show you around the van,? he said opening the door.
 He showed her the general supply cabinet that contained things  such as a Digital SLR camera, crime scene tape, a stretcher for animal transport, and face masks.  There was also medical examination and surgical equipment to evaluate and treat animals for emergency life-threatening conditions, as well as necropsy equipment and also evidence collection supplies.
 Finally he showed her the grave detection and exhumation equipment.
 ?This thing is fantastic,? she said stepping outside the van.  ?We should have something like this for our crime scenes too.?
 ?There is too much crime in Vegas,? a voice from behind her said.
 She turns to see Tya.  ?Hi Tya,? Beth said.  She introduced Tya and Isaac.
 ?It is time to see how this thing works,? Tya said shaking his hand.  She handed him an address, ?An officer answered a domestic dispute call and in the back yard they found several carcasses, the owner claims they died natural, my man is not sure.?
  ?Shall we?? he said opening the door.  Beth smiled and got inside.
 Meanwhile at the house Gil and Sara had showered and dressed, ?I do believe the kitchen never did get cleaned,? she said smiling at him.
 ?That is because I am married to the hottest woman alive,? he said playfully slapping her bottom. 
She headed for the kitchen as he called Russ to talk about converting the basement into a studio apartment for Ryan and Tya.   
       
   
         


 

Billyjorja

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #10 on: May 15, 2009, 05:36:27 AM »
What lovely parents they are.

Trish

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #11 on: May 15, 2009, 01:16:08 PM »
This is am interesting out take on GSR.  I like it.

GSRLOVER34

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #12 on: May 15, 2009, 07:57:47 PM »
Very cute and sweet chapter!

trishj

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CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #13 on: May 19, 2009, 08:36:44 PM »
Chapter 4

Ryan took Tya to dinner that Friday night and asked her to be his wife, she went home wearing the Grissom family ring.  Warrick, Gil, Ryan and Russ worked to convert the basement into an efficiency apartment.
 They would have a small kitchen, living room, bedroom an bath.  Sara told then they were welcome to use the laundry room and the den.  Russ ran a phone line to the basement and cable.
 ?Dad,? Beth said.  ?Can I have Ryan?s room after he gets married??  Ryan said, ?You can have it before them.  Dad said I can move to the apartment when it is done and that will be next week.?  Gil smiled, ?I guess that is settled.  Then he added, ?Your Mom is looking for you Ladybug.?
 Beth smiled and took off to find her Mom.  ?Dad,? Ryan said, ?The phone is for you.?  Gil thanked him and took the call.  ?Mr. Grissom, this is Isaac.?  ?Hello Isaac,? he said.  ?I was wondering if ?.. well I would like to ?.,? Isaac was falling over his words. 
Gil laughed as he remembered stumbling over his words around Sara.  ?As long as she wants to I don?t have a problem with it,? Gil told the boy.  ?Thank you sir,? Isaac said.  ?One thing,? Gil said.  ?Sir,? he said cutting Gil off.  ?I would never do anything to disrespect any woman and most assuredly not Beth.?
 ?Thanks,? Gil said joking, ?I would hate to have to feed you to my bugs.?  Isaac gave a worried laugh.  ?I am only teasing son,? Gil said.
 In the living room Beth said, ?Of all the nerve.  What on God?s green earth makes him think I would want to go out with him??
 Sara had said that she had overheard one of the men at the lab talking about asking her out.  ?I can?t stand that fool,? Beth said.  ?I just thought I should tell you,? Sara said.
 ?Is it true?? Beth asked her Mom.  ?Is what true?? she asked Beth.  ?I heard that you and his Dad had a history??  Sara sat on the couch, memories cane back to her that she would just as soon forget.  ?Well?? Beth asked.  ?We dated,? Sara said.  ?Before Dad I hope,? Beth said. 
 Sara smiled, ?Have a seat.?  Beth sat next to her Mom.  ?From the minute I laid eyes on your father I knew he was the one I wanted.  It just took him longer to realize I was the one he wanted.  I dated Allen?s father to make Gil jealous.?  ?Did it work?? Beth asked.
 What Sara was about to tell her daughter she had not spoken of in years. 
?Your father darn near killed him.?  Beth?s eyes opened wide, ?What!?  ?I was not interested in Jerry,? Sara said.
 ?I just used him to make Gil jealous.  Jerry wanted to take the relationship to the next level, when I told him the real reason why I was dating he got angry, I had never seen him that mad.  He beat me and then raped me.  When your father found out  he went off the deep end.  He hunted Jerry down, if it was not for the fact that Jim was with him I do believe Gil would have killed him.  It took Jim and another officer to pull Gil off Jerry. ?
 ?Mom, I never knew,? Beth said hugging her mother.  ?He did go to jail?? Beth asked.  ?He was charged with assault and rape,? Sara said.  ?He served 10 years of a 20 year sentence.  Allen was born while Jerry was in prison.?   Beth looked at her mother, a puzzled look on her face.
 ?It seems like I was not the only woman Jerry was seeing,? Sara snickered.  ?Molly did not turn down his request for sex.  Jerry and Molly married right after he got out.?   ?WOW!? was all Beth could say.  ?Allen is as big a jerk as his dad from what I hear,? Beth said.  ?Hey sis,? Ryan yelled, ?Phone.?  ?If that is Allen I might just shoot him myself,? she said laughing.
 It was not Allen it was Isaac.  Beth walked smiling back into the kitchen, walking on cloud nine.  ?Good news?? he dad asked.  ?Yep,? was all she said.  Gil smiled.  He went to find Sara to tell her, he found her in their room, crying.
  ?Love, what is it?? he asked gathering her in his arms.  Sara buried her head in his chest and cried.  Gil tenderly lift her face, he kissed her tears.  ?Sweetheart, what is it,? he asked.
 Sara told him about her talk with Beth.  ?I guess it was just stirring up all those old memories,? she said.  ?Now his son wants to be with our daughter.?  Gil smiled at her, ?I doubt that will happen.?  He told her of his talk with Isaac and Beth?s phone call.  ?I am so happy,? Sara said.  ?Isaac is such a sweet boy.?                 
       
   
         


 

GSRLOVER34

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Re: CSI - The Next Generation
« Reply #14 on: May 19, 2009, 09:38:42 PM »
Great chapter!

What a great line, I would hate to have to feed you to my bugs. Loved it!  :D