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GSRLOVER34

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #45 on: April 28, 2009, 10:34:17 PM »
Great chapter!

Very sweet speech that Eli gave.

I hope they pick option #2, they weren't planning on having anymore kids anyway, were they?

Billyjorja

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #46 on: April 29, 2009, 05:37:48 AM »
Lovely chapters, lovely surprises.  Had to get the tissues out.

Trish

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #47 on: April 29, 2009, 06:50:01 AM »
This for me was a very emotional chapter and very lovely, I hope they chose option 2 because I am sure Sara would like to nurse her new baby ,more soon please  ;D

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #48 on: April 29, 2009, 08:36:58 AM »
I think they'll make the right choice; the strong choice. Sara already feels that this is her last child; physically and emotionally drained. All of Sara's children have blue eyes, except Eli's whose are green like Warrick's right? So, I think that the littlest Grissom should have chocolate brown eyes....

What a cutie... ;)

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #49 on: April 29, 2009, 09:03:52 AM »
I have a feeling it will be option #2 also.  And three cheers for Eli, what a great speech.  Looking fordward to your next update.

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #50 on: April 29, 2009, 12:07:01 PM »
Okay, what's the second surprise? 
 I tend to go for the 1st solution.  She's healthy otherwise and can take the operation.  SHe's on the operating table anywy so they can deal with any bleeding with cauterization etc. The medication is not forever and babies DO survive on formula or maybe another mother could give milk for a few months. They can afford it. And the benefit is that Sara keeps all her parts.  I imagine losing a uterus would be a major adjustment for Sara and more emotional support from Grissom. What about going home - 4 older kids, new baby maybe with some problems like colic or something, certainly no sleep, what does this do for postpartum depression ? And don't you think that Grissom would have more trouble dealing with a short crisis instead of some permanent solution?

Am I just being a jerk here? Tell me where I'm wrong since all of you picked solutioon #2.

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #51 on: April 29, 2009, 02:30:13 PM »
I don't think you're being a jerk since you brought up some good points.  Breast feeding can be a very special "bonding" time between mother and baby but it's not the end of the world if it doesn't happen.   

I'm gonna have to go with number 1 also.  She may have a total of 5 kids but losing the ability to have children whether you want more or not is still a hard thing to deal with.  There is a psychological adjustment to it that can be exascerbated by possible postpartum depression.  Not being thrown into menopause would help but I think she'd still feel the loss....

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #52 on: April 29, 2009, 05:58:05 PM »
Interesting discussion! Here's the next chapter---Two more to go until the conclusion. Enjoy

By the time the two returned home, two older nuns, good-natured, laughing women, had fed, bathed, and read to four little children. Grissom brought ice cream as a treat before bedtime. Sara settled on the sofa and related the physician?s explanation of her condition to the women while children chattered and ate with their dad.

?I don?t know that I am capable of making a decision,? she said.

The older nun came to her side. ?Yes, you can. Do what is necessary for your own health, Sara. Your baby is fine. We will be here to take care of everything else.? She combed Sara?s hair away from her face. ?We?ll get the kids to sleep; you and Grissom go to the porch.?

The porch bed had proven to be a creative place for children and adults. Sara had spent hours on it as she watched her children play. They had returned to their happy, playful temperaments, rarely disagreeing with each other, never straying far from the porch. It was easy for one to crawl onto the bed and snuggle next to Sara, and after one came, the second one arrived, and all four would end up beside her. Even Grissom joined them on the swaying bed, letting the giggling gang crawl over him as he pretended to nap.

If truth were known, Grissom?s favorite time on this specially designed bed was when he could be alone with Sara. They would tuck children into beds?Sara saved her last upright time for bedtime, touching each child in the few minutes before sleep came. Grissom knew this was important to her.

Tonight, their neighbors, whose presence in the house was almost constant now, would cuddle and rock and read to the children until sleep closed their eyes. The women would quietly leave by the back door so they would not disturb the couple on the porch.

?We have good neighbors,? Sara said quietly as she laid her head on Gil?s chest.

He was propped on multiple pillows one arm behind his head. ?Have you thought about what to do?? He had worried for weeks; he did not want to make this decision.

?I?ve read everything about this, Gil. It?s?the safest way to do this is to have the uterus taken out.? She lifted her head. ?It sounds like an amazing procedure?just wish it was not me.? She sighed. ?I?ll have my little Will, Eli gets a brother.?

Grissom?s lips touched her hair. ?I love you, Sara.?

?She set a date, talked with her doctor, made plans with her neighbors. She called one good friend. For a change, time passed swiftly.

?Greg is coming.?

Grissom smiled. He had already gotten an email from Greg.

?You knew! Did he tell you I asked him to come??

He nodded. ?I knew you would invite him. The kids love him and he can drive Eli to school. Show and tell with Greg?that should keep everyone entertained.?

Grissom still thought of Greg as a smart young kid in the lab and often forgot how many years had passed since that time.

Sara rolled to her side. ?You know Greg is almost the same age as you were when we met.? She watched as his eyes grew wide. ?Yes, he is.?

A gruff grunt came from Grissom. ?He needs to settle down, start a family.?

She snickered. ?Yeah, like someone else we know so well.? She poked a finger into his ribs to make sure he understood who she was talking about.

?Greg Sanders entering the Grissom home created a minor tsunami as this tidal wave of his laughter and squeals of delight from four children rolled from the porch throughout the house. Sara heard it begin from the bedroom.

With Greg came entertainment as he relived childhood jokes, toys, and stories; the uncle every child needs as he pulled presents from his bag and candy from his pockets?not the little pieces of candy their parent let them have, but huge candy bars and giant packages of sweet stuff. He put a pink glitter jeweled crown on Eli?s head and acted confused as the girls laughed at his mistake.

?That?s for a girl!? Bizzy said between giggles.

Greg reached into his bag. ?Does this mean Eli gets this?? He tossed a large bag of marshmallows in the air catching it before it landed.

The questioning looks on four faces became more confused as he pulled another object out?a long clear hollow tube with an assortment of odd attachments. The children were silent, round mouths and wide eyes watching as he opened the bag of colored marshmallows and dropped one into the tube.

?Watch this,? he said right before his mouth covered an opening and he blew. The small marshmallow was lost as it flew across the room amid the ensuing excitement of not one, but four identical shooters were passed into little hands.

Annie ate the first handful as her attempts to blow into the tube turned the small sweet confections into slobbery, spit covered blobs of sticky goo. Greg wiped her mouth and her shooter as he was pelted with flying marshmallows from three others. With shouts of glee, he scooted behind a chair with Annie and they tossed the soft puffed sweets back to the shooters.

?I don?t even want to know what?s going on,? Sara said from her bed.

?Neither do I.? Grissom said. He had picked Greg up at the airport and given him a detailed account of Sara?s condition. He had not needed to include his own agonizing fear.

Greg had also read all he could on Sara?s condition. ?What?s she going to do?? He asked.

?Caesarean hysterectomy. She decided it was the safest procedure?less bleeding, less chance of a lot of things.?

?I read where this happens and no one knows until delivery?blood loss can be tremendous, the mother can die...? he stopped in mid-sentence as he suddenly realized the implications of what he said. ?Sorry.?

?I?ve read it all, Greg.? He chuckled in an unfunny way. ?Sara thinks it will be an interesting procedure to watch. They will actually remove the uterus with the baby inside, then make the incision to take the baby.?

?You going in??

?Yeah.?

Nothing else was said about the event scheduled for two days.

Sara, her housekeeper, and two neighbors had made lists for everything. Greg was there for distraction?he knew his job?amuse four young children with enough activity so they did not miss their parents. Much.

"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #53 on: April 29, 2009, 06:44:01 PM »
First: Sara is a lot nicer "Mommy" than me because if Greg was teaching my kids to blow marshmallows around my house....Boy oh Boy!!

Second: I knew she'd make the right decision.

Third: Great update! Only two left??? Now I'll have to start reading really SLOWLY

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #54 on: April 29, 2009, 07:16:05 PM »
Whatever decision Sara made is the right one for her and her family.

So nice to have Greg around for the children, spitting marshmallows, oh what a mess.

Look forward to the next update, always sad to know that the end is near.

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #55 on: April 29, 2009, 08:47:42 PM »
Great chapter!

Sara made the right decision.

trishj

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #56 on: April 29, 2009, 08:49:55 PM »
All I have to say is if it was my house Greg better clean up his mess.    ;D
I knew Sara would make the decision best for her and her her family, Gil will be there to support her as always.  Great story, look fordward to the next installment.

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #57 on: April 30, 2009, 05:16:07 AM »
Glad the kids have Greg as an uncle, he sounds so much fun.

Great chapter as usual.

Trish

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #58 on: April 30, 2009, 09:15:14 AM »
?This was a new experience for them?Sara had not scheduled previous deliveries. This one was planned to the minute. No hurrying into the hospital, no labor pains, no quick shower with Grissom pacing the floor, no panic to get children to the neighbors?a suitcase was packed, she had taken a long bath, and her children were happy and laughing at their Uncle Greg?s plans for the day. The housekeeper had arrived early and the neighboring nuns even earlier. Greg had already ingratiated himself into the graces of these women who would feed, dress, and keep a semblance of order in her house for the next few days.

The staff at the hospital welcomed them as old friends. Admission paperwork was ready, a wheelchair took Sara to a bright room and, before she could change into a hospital gown, her doctor appeared.

?The day is finally here?are you ready?? The woman looked at Grissom as she asked her question. She knew Sara was prepared. He responded by holding up his own package of hospital clothing.

?I am. At this point, I?m an observer.?

She went over the procedure; information already studied and signed by Sara. The physician ticked off a checklist. ?Without complications and I expect none, we should be able to use the regional anesthesia. You?ll be awake for everything?you will get to hold little William as soon as he?s born.?

Sara?s first surprise was the number of people in the surgical room. In previous deliveries, there had been a couple of nurses, the doctor, Grissom in a quiet room. Today, a dozen people checked equipment, all dressed in the sterile green or blue scrubs. The anesthesiologist sat at her head; at least one other physician was in the room. Sara lost count of who was doing what. Grissom rolled his stool to her left so she could see him and within minutes, she was draped and shielded from whatever was going to happen to her abdomen. Monitors beeped with her heart rate and the baby?s.

She heard the physician?s soft words of direction and time seemed to stop as the room grew quiet except for the machines and the soft wisp of gloves and fabric moving. A mirror had been adjusted so Grissom could watch the surgery. Sara watched him.

?Dr. Grissom, step around here.? Sara?s doctor said. ?You should see this up close.?

Grissom found her hand and squeezed it before leaving his seat.

The doctor held a smooth round object in her hands. ?This is the uterus. Looks good on the outside which means the placenta has not invaded the abdomen.? The second physician made a quick incision and a small hand appeared, not much larger than the end of his thumb. Hands moved swiftly.

?Hold out your hands,? a voice said. A small cloth was placed over his hands; the surgeon removed the baby from its enclosed sac and placed him in Grissom?s hands. ?Miracle isn?t it,? said the same voice.

Sara could see Grissom?s eyes above his face mask. He had been excited at Bizzy?s birth. He had been amazed and excited when the twins were born. Today, he stood in awe and she knew all the complications of the past weeks had been worth this moment. He turned to her and she saw his blue eyes brimming with tears.

?Is he okay?? She asked.

She saw his head move. ?Yes. Perfect. He?s beautiful.? His voice choked and she heard a soft chuckle. ?He?s a Grissom.? In a few minutes, the baby was put across her chest. Whatever else was done to her body was completed without her awareness of the process. The plump pink baby was perfect, all tiny fingers and toes in the right places, miniature lips that came together making a gurgling sucking sound?nearly identical to those pressed to Sara?s hair.

Some nonsense words came out of her mouth. The baby looked at her, breathing a sigh of what sounded like relief, and closed his eyes again without making a single cry. Grissom?s finger worked into the small hand.

?This was the first part of him I saw,? he said. ?Almost waving.?

?He knows his dad already.? Sara cradled the baby?s head. ?And look, his hair looks like Annie?s and Ava?s?I believe I have my little Gilbert.? She smiled.

?William,? he said. ?Not Gilbert.?

The baby wiggled, making a wet gurgling sound, and instinctively, she attempted to wrap both arms around him forgetting her right arm was attached to a line. Grissom?s hand folded around the baby and the two inspected delicate fingers and tiny pea sized toes and velvet like wrinkles just as thousands of parents do.

Sara?s broad smile was one of happiness, relief, and exhaustion. ?He is a Grissom.? The father of this baby kissed her. ?William Gilbert Grissom.?

Grissom grunted. Sara knew she heard a pleased, baby-size sound echoing from the baby.

One more chapter to conclude this little fan fic! Thanks for reading--especially appreciate all your comments.
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: A Few Days with the Grissoms
« Reply #59 on: April 30, 2009, 09:39:45 AM »
What a sweet chapter!

Now Sara has herself a miniature Gilbert.  :D