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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #30 on: April 09, 2009, 05:07:50 AM »
Very nicely done.  I believe every marriage needs this kind of passion to continue to bloom.  Children and the necessities of life often times puts passion on the back burner, it needs to come to the front, at least once in a while. 

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #31 on: April 09, 2009, 05:18:13 AM »
You describe everything so beautifully.

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #32 on: April 09, 2009, 09:42:18 AM »
A/N: Two or three more posts to finish this one by tomorrow! Thanks for reading.

Grissom had been truthful; he had ordered only desserts?two different cakes, a slice of apple pie, fruit and whipped cream, cheesecake with blueberries, and chocolate sauce as thick as pudding. He watched as she dipped a finger in cream, then chocolate. By then she was back in bed wearing his shirt, her hair curling naturally around her shoulders, laughing and teasing.

?I love you, Sara.?

Her face turned to his, a gentle, sweet smile on her face, her eyes dancing. ?Oh, Gil, I know?I love you so much.? Her head came to rest against his shoulder. ?Every day, I realize how good you?ve made my life, how much you love our children.?

He took a cherry from the tray and placed it in her mouth. Between her giggles and his laughter, she managed her mouth trick, tying a knot in the stem with her tongue before holding it between her teeth. She had done this same trick hundreds of times, always causing him to laugh.

Most of the food disappeared.

?I was hungry.? Sara?s spoon scraped the last of the whipped cream from its bowl.

?We can order more, Mrs. Grissom.?

She laughed and propped herself against pillows. Her hand rested on her belly. ?I?m full?cake, pie, all that fruit?I need to take a walk.?

Grissom collected plates and empty containers and cleared the bed. Sara watched as he maneuvered the cart to the hallway and snickered as he kept his naked body behind the door while pushing the cart through the doorway.

?I love your butt,? she said with a laugh as he turned around and before he reached the bed, she realized she loved other parts of his anatomy just as well.

The quietness of the night settled around them as the two wrapped warm arms together. ?Thank you for coming, Sara.?

She kissed his jaw, his chin, his lips as he smiled. She raised her head causing her hair to fall around their faces. He knew she was smiling and he knew there was a question coming.

?What?? He asked.

She cupped her chin and rested on his chest. ?One more, Gil. I want one more baby.? She knew his thoughts as well as he knew hers.

?Why am I not surprised?? His hands brought her face to rest against his. ?Annie and Ava are not walking yet and you want another one.? He chuckled a low laugh. ?I knew years ago you would make a wonderful mother?we should have married then.?

She snorted. ?It took years to get you to notice me! When did you think that??

?Years ago?you told me you left the little girl in the car with the windows cracked. If I remember correctly, Warrick and Nick nearly split a gut trying not to laugh. I knew then I wanted you?pure, unadulterated lust?as the mother of my children.?

She soft punched his ribs. ?You did not. You ignored me for years.?

?Five, Sara. Do you think we can handle five??

?It?s already a circus most of the time?what?s one more little monkey? And maybe, we would have a little boy?with your butt!? She giggled again as she turned and curled even closer. ?You know?we grew up with one parent. I know I would have been different?had a different life, different way of looking at things?if I had sisters and brothers. My mother was an only child?her life, what happened to her?I think things would have worked out so much better?she had no one but me, and most of the time I was not a good daughter.?

Grissom knew it was difficult for Sara to talk about her childhood and she did so in the vaguest of terms.

?We will probably have another girl.?

?Four girls?poor Eli. I?ll name her after my mom. But maybe I?ll get my little Gilbert.?

?Sara slipped into the back of the large conference room crowded with men in suits, young adults in jeans and tee shirts, women in business attire, and dozens dressed in casual working clothes of researchers. Gil Grissom had pulled a mixed, interesting group to listen to his presentation on bumblebees. He had taken the lead in this project by accident and now had a nationwide following of volunteers counting bumblebees.

She stood at the back, watching and listening, as he talked, showing photographs, charts and graphs from across the country, of areas where bumblebees had disappeared, and fields of flowers where the big bee had been reestablished. He smiled when he saw her leaning against the back wall.

The rest of the day, he spent with her, walking major streets filled with tourists and locals in the clatter and clash of dozens of different languages. They found side streets and narrow alleys with swirling, towering roof lines and flashing signs, small quiet plazas served as an oasis for cafes and coffee bars and games of chess and toddling babies. Sara found the hidden street of a mystery writer and pointed to iron balconies with Chinese cornices and pagodas and smiling Buddhas. They entered a tiny temple covered with red lanterns and statues and incense to see alters dedicated to long forgotten homes and events in the distant past. Grissom folded delicate rice paper around his donation as he passed bills to an elderly guardian.

Late in the afternoon, they returned to an area hidden from many?a cobblestone path through a garden that Sara had led him to when they met the first time. It had not changed in years. Trees, vines, and a riot of flowers made a green tunnel that opened onto a wooden staircase overlooking the bay. On his first visit, Grissom had been stunned into silence as the young girl he followed stopped and stepped aside.

Today, they walked together, linked arm-in-arm, noticing the fluttering birds and flower pots hanging from shingle houses. When they reached the top, they stood in silent awe as the city and the bay stretched below them as a magic carpet.

?It?s beautiful,? she whispered.

?Yes,? he said but he was no longer looking at the view, but the woman standing beside him.   

"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #33 on: April 09, 2009, 09:45:41 AM »
Another great chapter, another little monkey to add to the circus, that would make Sara even happier than she is now.
Look forward to the next update.

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #34 on: April 09, 2009, 09:46:21 AM »
Great chapter!

This chapter was very sweet, and one more wouldn't any.  ;) :D

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #35 on: April 09, 2009, 09:50:02 AM »
great chapter ,oh my gosh she want's another baby ,Is she mad ??? LoL  ;D

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #36 on: April 09, 2009, 10:23:39 AM »
One more would be great.  I know he think of Eli as his own but they need another boy to even things out.

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« Reply #37 on: April 09, 2009, 05:57:10 PM »
Four children stood in front of their mother. Heads dropped as she scolded in her soft voice.

?Who did this?? She asked. She knew the answer. Sugared cream lined the lips of two little girls?angelic appearances belied their true natures as their eyes met hers in pretended innocence. The look was one of their father?s?how many times had he raised a similar mocking eyebrow. Blonde ringlets could barely be contained by the colorful clips in their hair and their mother knew denial was on their tongues. ?No? had been their first word.

The third little girl, her dark hair so similar to her mother?s, raised blue eyes to meet her mother?s brown ones and quickly shifted a side glance at her brother. Her eyes were already flooded with tears, but no sound escaped.

The oldest child, Eli, hooked thumbs into his belt loops and kept his head down. He knew his sisters would not tell but looked to him to answer.

The object of the question sat on the table. It had been a beautiful cake, specially made and delivered for their dad?s birthday.

But something had happened that started out as just a small taste by one finger. Eli had dipped one finger into the fluffy frosting and when his sister, Bizzy, had asked for a taste, another finger full of frosting had gone into her mouth. Then Ava had stomped her foot and demanded her own bite and insisted on dragging her own finger around the side of the cake. As soon as Annie saw what was happening, she climbed into a chair and used two fingers for a taste.

Six year old Eli realized his younger sisters were making a mess of things, so he divided the cake into four equal parts by using his finger. In just a few minutes, only bare cake layers remained, stark and naked in the center of the table?just as their mother appeared in the doorway.

No one had answered her question.

?Okay?all of you. Chair time. I?ll decide when you can get up.?

The four children slowly walked to four small chairs; three pairs of blue eyes kept watching their brother for any sign of a response. They turned their chairs to face a wall, each knowing the procedure of punishment?no talking, no playing, just silence until their mother decided the penalty had been satisfied. Eli?s green eyes briefly met the blue eyes of each sister. He felt a certain satisfaction that they had not tattled. The tears of Bizzy disturbed him the most. She would never tell on him, but her tender emotions made his chest hurt as silent tears ran down her face.

Sara watched her children sit in the playroom chairs. She had stifled laughter as she watched their sober procession and now turned back to the cake. A door opened and her husband appeared with their dog. He saw the woman he loved holding their newest addition?a son, Will, in one arm, and a box of sugar in her hand. The baby squirmed to reach his father. Sara had gotten her wish?a male child the image of his dad, right down to the cleft in his baby chin and twin dimples on his backside?along with a scar across her lower abdomen as evidence of her only difficult pregnancy.

?Where is everyone?? He kissed her and took the baby. ?Hey, little buddy?where is all the noise??

She held a finger to her lips and pointed at the cake. ?Your birthday cake. No one admits guilt?even with sugar on their lips! Can you believe that?? Both quietly laughed.

?And you have them in the chairs?? Grissom walked around the table, laughing. ?I wish I had a hidden camera.? He inspected the cake. ?It looks as if they licked it clean.?

Sara?s hand covered her mouth as she muffled a laugh. ?You should have seen their faces. It took less than three minutes! I changed Will and this was done?Eli has them well trained. No one tattled.?

Back in the kitchen, they heard sniffles and sobs coming from the playroom. ?Bizzy was already in tears?I?m sure all of them are crying by now.? She took the baby from him. ?Go tell them??

Grissom stepped to the doorway, announcing, ?Mom says you can get up now!?

Immediately, he was overtaken by four pairs of arms and a rambling of words of welcome until he asked why they were being punished. The girls grew silent and looked at their brother whose eyes briefly met his mother?s. He breathed deeply and stuck hands in his pockets.

?We ate your cake?the best part.?

?You did?? Grissom had knelt to put arms around the children as each managed to find a way to snuggle against him. ?Was it good??

Three curly heads nodded, but Eli shook his head, his fingers pinched his nose and rubbed his eyes. ?It was when we ate it, but now I?m sad we did. It was your birthday cake.? He sniffed as a tear dropped.

Grissom?s eyes met Sara?s, both suppressing the laughter, and Sara turned her back to hide her amusement.

?Eli, I?ll bet you and Mom can make another frosting?even better. I?ll take the girls and pick flowers for the table while you two work on it.?

Tears and sniffles disappeared as the three girls giggled and ran to find shoes and a flower basket.

Eli hugged his mother. ?I?m sorry. I did it first.? He backhanded his eyes. ?I won?t do it again.?

Sara knew it would not be frosting on a cake, but there would be a next time when he was leader of misbehavior, urged on by three whispering sisters. She kissed him, put the baby in his highchair and pulled the step stool out for Eli.

?We can make this better, but not as beautiful as it was,? she explained as she gathered sugar and whipping cream, showing him how to pour sugar into a bowl.

?You have mail,? Grissom passed a letter to her, smiling as she took the envelope and looked at the return address.

Her eyes brightened?a publisher?thicker than two previous ones. She smiled as she read the letter. ?A check! They have accepted my manuscript! I?m to be published, Gil! A real author!?

Grissom wrapped arms around her, kissing her passionately. ?Congratulations?I knew you could do it.?

One more chapter to complete this one! Enjoy!
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #38 on: April 09, 2009, 08:31:05 PM »
Great chapter!

Good for Sara, for getting a book published.

trishj

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #39 on: April 09, 2009, 08:36:43 PM »
Fantastic job.  I have four grown children and like Gil and Sara's, they would not squeal on each other either.  I am glad you let Gil have another boy.

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« Reply #40 on: April 09, 2009, 10:42:40 PM »
What a beautiful family, Sara gets the son she was hoping for and gets a book published. Update soon, always sad when I know your story is about to end.

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« Reply #41 on: April 09, 2009, 11:21:51 PM »
?Daddy?ready!?

?Daddy, flowers, now!?

?Sunflowers, I want sunflowers.?

?Not the ones with bees!?

?I want blue ones to match my eyes.? This came from Annie, one of the twins and the only girl to get what her mother called ?the girly gene?.

Sara and Gil separated enough to look downward as three faces smiled up at them, feet dancing in bright plastic shoes.

?What?s next, Mom??

Eli?s question caused Sara to turn in his direction just as the baby joined in the noisy commotion, clearly saying ?Da-da,? reaching arms to his father. The baby was picked up and with giggles and tumbling excitement, little girls, along with their father and baby brother, exited the house.

Sara and Eli worked on repairing the cake. As they spread the sweetened whipped cream around the cake, Eli said, ?We don?t have to tell Sister Deborah do we??

Sara smiled. ?No, we won?t tell her. It was very nice of her to bring a cake and we?ll have to tell her how good it was.? Sara knew Eli wanted the neighboring nuns to think well of him. She watched as the little boy spread fluffy white cream across the top of the cake. ?You are a good boy, Eli, and your sisters look up to you to do the right thing.?

He nodded as he worked on the cake. ?I made them promise not to tell.?

?And they didn?t tell, did they.?

?No.? His bright eyes looked up from the cake. ?It was wrong to make them promise, wasn?t it??

?I love you, Eli.? She placed an arm around him and hugged him. ?Promises are a good thing, but we must be careful what we promise.?

She started singing words to a familiar song. Eli joined her. After several lines, he stopped.

?Wait, Mom.? Sara stopped singing. ?We need new words?we need to sing ?As long as there?s the seven of us?, not just two.?

?You are right.? They started singing again.

Grissom heard the two harmonizing voices as he held a finger to his lips for quiet. ?Mom and Eli are singing; let?s listen,? he whispered. The girls hushed, making the same motion to each other as they entered the house with hands full of flowers, trying to be quiet so they could hear the song.

?You?ve got to laugh a little, cry a little, until clouds roll by a little. That?s the story of, that?s the glory of love. As long as there?s the seven of us, we?ve got the world and all its charms??

Attempted silence lasted only until the children entered the kitchen and saw their mother and brother putting the last swirl of frosting on the cake. Giggles and flowers, eager words, delighted squeals and running feet filled the room.

Grissom held his infant son and quietly finished the words of Sara?s song??That?s the story of, that?s the glory of love??as he watched his wife and children?his family.

The End!
(Here?s recognition to Benny Goodman and Bette Midler for above lyrics!) This is the seventeenth story of our version of Sara and Grissom. Thanks for reading and your kind reviews!
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #42 on: April 10, 2009, 05:14:56 AM »
And the end of another very very wonderful story from you girls ,I hope to read more of your wonderful ideas  in the future . :)

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #43 on: April 10, 2009, 05:43:30 AM »
Absolutely fantastic.  Can't wait for your next story.

Trish

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« Reply #44 on: April 10, 2009, 07:36:11 AM »
This was wonderful, enjoyed every chapter.  Look forward to the next one.