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Butterfly114

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #15 on: April 07, 2009, 11:07:41 AM »
Another beautifully written chapter, also needed tissues. So sudden a loss, poor Sara her heart is broken, thankful Grissom and the children will be there for her.
Look forward to the next update.

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #16 on: April 07, 2009, 06:45:23 PM »
Just caught up with this story


Another great ff

I was getting worried when Grissom was taking for ever to get to the hotel

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #17 on: April 07, 2009, 08:55:11 PM »
?Daddy,? a small voice floated from the next bed. ?Momma.?

Sara untangled herself from Grissom?s arms. ?Hey, baby.? She lifted Bizzy from the bed. Grissom moved to take the two-year old and Sara as she crawled back into bed. Bizzy snuggled against her dad and reached out to her mother?s face. ?Go back to sleep, honey.? When Sara said her words, Bizzy stretched arms to her and wiggled to her mother.
 
?I?ll take Hank out and change clothes,? Grissom whispered, slipping from bed, knowing Sara?s comfort would come from having a child in her arms. By the time he returned, Bizzy was asleep, curled beside her mother. ?Let me move her.?

Sara?s hand stopped him. ?Leave her between us.? She smiled. ?It?s about the only time she gets all our attention.?
 
He grinned. ?Yeah, but just wait. Annie and Ava will be next?we?re going to need a bigger bed.? In her sleep, the little girl nestled against her father?s shoulder.
 
Sara smiled at both. ?You know, that?s my place she?s taken.?

Grissom moved Bizzy to his chest. ?It?s still your place. Are you okay??

?Yeah.? She put her head in the space where his arm met his shoulder, a place she claimed years ago as the place she belonged. ?I learned a while ago we have to take care of the living. I wish I had been there?with my mom?I?m not sure which is better?to know or to be surprised.?

?Once I said I?d like to see the rainforest and the pyramids, to know I was dying, but now, I want to live to be very old, see my kids grow up and be happy, go to bed one night at age ninety and not wake up.? He shifted their daughter so she lay across both of them. ?Your mother was happy seeing you happy.?
 
Sara brushed away tears. ?When will everything be finished??
 
Grissom knew she was referring to the university?s research center. Laura Sidle, along with the Catholic nuns she lived with, had donated their organs for research. ?Sister Deborah said the donation would be done quickly, body released for services by tomorrow or the next day.? He placed a kiss on her forehead. ?She was holding the photograph from the day we adopted Eli. That?s what she went back to get.?
 
He felt Sara?s smile on his skin before she kissed him. ?Thank you, Gil.?
 
He wasn?t sure why she thanked him, but hearing her sigh and feeling her relax, he knew she would be okay.
 
?Morning came early for four young children. The twins woke within minutes of each other, willing to wait as they babbled to each other. Eli stretched and yawned until he focused on the forms in the other bed, realizing his parents and sister were there. He tumbled out of bed and found a place by his dad who was already awake.

When Eli realized he had someone to talk to, he whispered questions. ?We played with new boys?can I play again? Can we eat breakfast with them? Do we have to wait on all the girls? Is our adventure trip ended??

Grissom smiled at Eli. At four, he already knew there were times when men and boys needed to be together. ?We?ll wait until mom wakes up; she might want to go with us for breakfast. We can walk Hank first.?
 
?I?m awake,? Sara said. ?Go ahead. Bizzy will sleep another hour. Put the babies in bed with me and we?ll be fine.?
 
The man and boy were out of bed and into the bathroom in minutes. Sara heard the noise as did the babies who began to fret after waiting patiently for attention. Grissom returned, changed diapers, cuddled one, then the other before passing them to Sara. Their sister, sleeping soundly, had straightened legs and flung arms outward to stretch across the bed vacated by their father.
 
?Father and son returned much later carrying a plate of waffles, finding three little girls awake and playing in the middle of the bed with their mother. Eli joined the play while Sara moved to the kitchen to eat.
 
?How are you?? Grissom asked.

?I?m fine, really. What a circus we have, Gil. There?s not much time to think, but I do need to call?I?m sure there are things I should do.?
 
He shook his head. ?The Sisters will take care of everything. We?ll go downstairs?Eli and his friends from yesterday are ready to play. The air is clear outside, so we?ll be there. Call Sister Deborah; she will want to hear from you. The fire is contained; we can go home later.? His hand covered hers. She had slept little and ate only a few bites. ?What can I do??

She smiled. ?You?ve already done all you can.? Her eyes filled with tears again. ?What made you stay yesterday? Why did you decide to go by their house??

He shook his head. ?I wanted to secure the house?I was afraid the women might need another pair of hands?I knew the kids were safe with you.? He covered her hand with his before announcing it was time to go play.
 

"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #18 on: April 07, 2009, 09:01:46 PM »
Great chapter!

At least Grissom will be there to help her through their time of need.

Butterfly114

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« Reply #19 on: April 07, 2009, 09:02:17 PM »
I love how you describe their time in bed with their children.  The nuns at the farm will be a great comfort to Sara.  Great update look forward to the next one.

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #20 on: April 08, 2009, 03:40:30 AM »
As usual this was a lovely chapter  they are a very happy family that have to deal with an unexpected time of their lives and with Grissoms help Sara will learn to cope with the loss of her mom ,please continue again soon ,

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #21 on: April 08, 2009, 06:00:14 AM »
Lovely but sad.  I know how Sara must feel I lost my husband the same way, one minute there the next gone.

More of the story soon.

Trish

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #22 on: April 08, 2009, 06:14:06 AM »
It is so good that Sara has her husband and children to comfort her.  The nuns will be a big help too.  Like Butterfly114 I love the way you described their time in be with the children.  I used to do that with mine when they were young, I loved it so.

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« Reply #23 on: April 08, 2009, 08:37:30 AM »
?Everything was as they had left it. The wildflowers still bloomed and swayed in a gentle breeze. The trees lining the driveway were green and glistened with developing apples unlike the scorched areas they had passed on their way home. The bright blue cloudless sky brought a measure of comfort to Sara as she unloaded things from the van. Home was untouched. She could not say the same about her emotional state. She watched as Eli chased Hank and Bizzy ran after both; Annie was in a baby swing on the porch while Ava watched from the stroller.
 
There was much to do, Sara thought, as she entered her home. A note was propped on the table along with a fruit pie, a loaf of bread, and fresh flowers. She turned to see Grissom at the door.

?Our neighbors have already visited today and invited us to dinner.? He came to her wrapping strong and steady arms around her. She rested her head against his shoulder. ?They are worried about you.?

?I?m fine, Gil. My mother was where she wanted to be. She had found peace?and she loved her grandchildren.?

Late afternoon, they arrived at the farmhouse where Laura Sidle had lived to find it full of guests who had arrived all afternoon after hearing of her death. Many were women who had visited the community over the years; others were church members or local neighbors. Sara and Grissom knew a few of the visitors, and everyone knew Laura.
 
After dinner, the group gathered in the small chapel to hear the Catholic prayers of devotion from the local priest. The next day, a small group would travel to the cemetery to bury the body, but tonight, they celebrated her life with them.

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??We?ll take care of the children; take Sara to the city. She?she is to thin. She needs to rest, eat without interruption.?

The woman speaking was helping collect honey from Grissom?s hives. In her sixties, Sister Deborah was the selected leader of the religious community where Laura Sidle had lived until her death. She had been the person responsible for the tranquil, composed life of Sara?s mother; she had given Sara refuge in a time when her own life had needed peace. Now she was giving a friend?s advice to Grissom?but he knew it was more than a simple suggestion.

?I?m not sure she will leave. The twins are ready to walk?she doesn?t want to miss their first steps.? He straightened from his work. ?She?s happy?she loves those babies.? He laughed. ?We are both happy, but you?re right. We haven?t been away since?I can?t remember.?
 
?She won?t miss their steps?we?ll make sure of that.? The older woman laughed as she placed the rack inside the hive.

?I don?t think she will go.?

?Insist. You two need some time. At least four of us, plus Lilly and her daughter?that?s six adults and four children?we can manage.? Lilly had been their part-time housekeeper since the arrival of twins and had become a valuable asset in their home.
 
They could see the subjects of their discussion playing on swings and a slide. Sara was holding a dark haired, little girl in her arms as the two glided to the bottom of the slide. Two smaller babies, with hair that resembled curly blonde halos, were in colorful baby swings and a slim, dark-haired little boy was climbing a ladder to the top of the slide.
 
?Reluctantly, Sara agreed to leave her children in the care of their neighbors, knowing the women would see to every need and knowing the children were familiar with the women who would be staying with them. As they drove away, driving less than two hours to the city, leaving for two nights, she kept looking back.

?I think I?ve forgotten something,? she said.
 
?They will be fine. It?s less than two hours.? He pulled her hand to his lips. ?They will have the best of care.? He had given orders to all the women who were staying with the children. One of the baby girls was ready to take her first steps. She was not to be encouraged until her mother returned; if she walked?well, they promised not to tell.
 
?They checked in to one of the oldest, grand hotels in the city and immediately, Grissom was surrounded by fellow conference attendees. He was making one short presentation on his bumblebee research, but was greeted as a primary attraction. Sara waited. She was always fascinated by his effortless ease with strangers who knew him by his writings.
 
The bellman rolled their luggage along the quiet hallway as they followed. Grissom had wrapped an arm around her in the elevator, gently caressing her shoulder. Sara smiled; he was trying to suppress his satisfaction, his pleasure that she had agreed to come with him.
 
The door opened to their room. The hotel employee stood to one side as they entered and Grissom dropped his hold and let her move into the room. He had watched her numerous times in her exploration of a new room.
 
Midway into the room, she turned to smile. ?Nice.?

The drapes were pulled open to reveal one of the most spectacular and recognized scenes in the world, a stunning view of the bay with its best known bridge and overlooking the city cascading below. One bed sat in the center of the room? lavish in its simplicity. Sara stood at the window while Grissom took care of luggage and dismissed the bellman.
He handed her a cell phone. ?Call home.?

She took the phone, but made no call. ?I promised not to call?until tomorrow.? She grinned. ?I?m really fine. You are right?I do need to be able to leave them.? She turned into his arms. ?I?m not even going to ask how you managed this room. You know how I love this city.?

They remained together watching distant ships and boats in the bay.

?I?m going downstairs for a short time. When I return, the rest of the day is ours?whatever you want to do.?

Sara stayed at the window remembering events in her past, of walking the streets, of hidden nooks and crannies, of all those things one does in youth before the frailty and reality of life imposes on ones hopes and dreams. The quiet settled around her?unusual silence of hearing no one else.

Her shoes were left by the window. She stepped out of her pants and folded the expensive bedcovers back and slipped between sheets as fine as silk. She stretched and listened to her own breathing, but before her head made an impression on the pillow, her eyes closed and she slept?
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #24 on: April 08, 2009, 08:53:19 AM »
Great chapter!

They really needed the time away for themselves.

Butterfly114

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #25 on: April 08, 2009, 09:29:30 AM »
So glad Grissom and Sara have some alone time, great chapter, look forward to the next update.

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #26 on: April 08, 2009, 09:48:27 AM »
Every couple needs time alone.  It strengths it.  Glad Sara and Gil could get some alone time.

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« Reply #27 on: April 08, 2009, 04:59:31 PM »
This chapter has a little bit of sweet stuff in it--not graphic, but just a warning for tender eyes!!

When her eyes opened, the room was no longer washed in bright sunlight but dimmed in the dusky golden glow of twilight. Her eyes focused on the figure in a chair pulled to her bedside. His eyes were on hers and a smile formed on his lips.

?Hey,? he whispered.

She returned a smile. ?I slept too long. The day is gone.?

?You needed to rest.?

She stretched and yawned. ?It was so quiet.?

He moved from his chair to the bed taking her hand in his. ?I love you, Sara.? He laced his fingers with hers. ?I forget to tell you.?

Sara smiled again, relaxed and warm, as she moved her hand to his shirt. ?You show me every day, Gil.? Her smile changed to one of seduction. ?We are alone in a beautiful room, husband?why am I alone in bed?? Her husky voice brought a chuckle from him as he moved from the bed to disappear into the bathroom. She heard the noise of water running before he reappeared waving his hand.

?Big tub,? he said, the tender tone in his voice unmistakable.

She giggled when she saw the tub filling with water and bubbles. His hands slid against her skin as he removed her shirt. She?s too thin, he thought, as she turned to him with slim fingers working buttons on his shirt, pushing it from his shoulders.

?I?ll be right back,? he said. ?One thing I need to do.?

By the time he returned, Sara was in the water almost covered by bubbles and clouds of steam. ?What was so important, Gilbert, that you had to leave me?? Her laughing, provocative voice hurried his actions and he stepped into the tub before he answered.

?Room service. I ordered food.? He lowered himself into the water as she moved from one end of the tub to sit between his legs.

?We could go out later, find something to eat, take a walk.?

His chest rumbled as his hands surrounded her abdomen, moving along wet skin as she leaned against him. ?I think I have all I need or want right here.? He reached for a switch that turned on pulsing jets of water, made another adjustment which changed the water to a slow rolling wave motion.

She turned, curled against his shoulder and sighed. ?I should call.?

?They are fine, Sara. I called home before you woke up. Lilly and her daughter are there with Sister Deborah and two others?it sounded like they are having a good time.?

Her hand moved to his face and gently stroked his jaw before kissing him. He returned her kiss, parting her lips with his tongue, feeling her smile. His arm circled her back and found that intimate spot where her chest began to swell. His fingers cupped and caressed her breast finding its firm crown. Their kisses deepened. Wet hands and fingers intertwined as legs wrapped. She relaxed as his hands massaged her back; her delicate fingers found the pleasure points along his chest.

He reached for the ornate hand shower and adjusted the spray, combing her hair with his hands as he emptied shampoo into his palm. She leaned her head back and he kissed the shallow depression at her throat.

?Sexy woman?we need out of this tub,? he whispered. He had remained in the tub until his body ached with desire.

Her hands seem to find sensitive places on his body with precise and delicate touches causing him to respond as she wanted. Somehow they managed to exit the tub, wrap towels around their bodies, and remain entwined?her lips never left his. His need pressed against her body and he heard a husky giggle.

?Bed,? he said.

Sara unrolled from his grasp and the towel, running naked across the room and slipping into the bed. He followed dropping the towels in the process.

His passion brought her response; as long-time partners they knew what excited the other, what brought delight in love-making. Her hands held him, her long fingers explored with feather touches, her lips, her tongue touched and teased in places known only to her. He could feel her smiling lips when he groaned.

She was ready for him; her black eyes flashed as he reached for the square packet at the bedside. She took it from him and tore the wrapper with her teeth. His body throbbed as she slowly, carefully, and with exaggerated effort unrolled it. Within seconds, he was above her, inside her warm, wet, welcoming center of desire. He felt her breath against his neck.

?I love you,? he whispered.

It had been months since they had experienced intense passion. In this elegant hotel, the muted sounds of the city far below, they rediscovered the passionate, prolonged sexual power that neither had forgotten. It had been quietly shelved in their day to day lives, but tonight, this drive was awakened. Remembered experiences came back as fingertips touched, lips met, and words whispered.

He always thought of the sea as he made love to her?a powerful surge of waves and surf, sometimes predictable, often overtaking every sensation in his body. He neither knew nor cared if he tumbled to the bottom because she, this woman who desired him without question, would save him, bring him with her, leading him into calm currents?warm, fluid, life-giving.

They were spent, exhausted, yet unable to pull apart.

?We?ve let the food get cold,? she whispered.

?It doesn?t matter.? There was a chuckle in his voice. ?I ordered only desserts.?

She laughed, softly, teasing his neck with her flickering tongue. Neither wanted this time to end. ?Chocolate??

?Yes, and strawberries and whip cream and cheesecake.?

She slid under the covers to taste his chest; lips touching his skin in caressing kisses. ?I love desserts.? He groaned as she slipped further under the sheets, playing her tongue and fingers along sensitive areas only she knew. Gentle pressure of her palm pressed against his thigh. His hips moved against her in an involuntary movement.

?Sara.? His breath caught in his chest. He could say no more. She knew what she was doing as she quickly moved against him generating heat and bliss, desire and pleasure. He could wait no longer as instinct drove him to her. She rose above him, throwing covers behind her body as an all-consuming consciousness took over her actions. Her breathing stopped for seconds as passion overwhelmed all other senses. He managed an edge of control before she collapsed on his chest and he wrapped arms and legs around her as he rolled above her.

?Dear God, there is a heaven,? she said as her breathing returned to normal.

Her words brought laughter to both. ?You are heaven, Sara.? His hand pushed her hair away from her face. Her brown eyes were liquid pools of dilated darkness. ?You may have to resuscitate me; I don?t think I can move,? he said.

?Food. I?m hungry.? Sara slipped from the bed, finding a shirt to throw around her as she moved a tray to the bed. The room service cart was one of old-fashioned elegance; food covered with silver domes, a flower in a crystal vase. She made a delighted sound as she uncovered a plate to find whipped cream, another with strawberries, another with chocolate warmed by its container. She smiled.
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Fire, Death and Family
« Reply #28 on: April 08, 2009, 05:18:44 PM »
Beautifully written, you have captured the love between Grissom and Sara.
Look forward to the next update.

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« Reply #29 on: April 08, 2009, 05:48:11 PM »
I love it more very soon please  .