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Saying Yes to Eli
« on: March 12, 2009, 12:15:26 AM »
Here is our follow-up to A Trip to Las Vegas, all fluff. Finished in 3-4 chapters. Enjoy! Also at fanfiction.net.

?I have a packet of papers for you,? the lawyer said over the phone. ?We have final signatures for adoption.? Her voice sounded tentative, soft, unlike a courtroom lawyer. This woman specialized in adoptions, private ones, when a birth parent is involved in selecting adoptive parents for a child.

Months earlier Eli Brown had come to live with the Grissom?s for six months. Now, his birth mother, half-way around the globe, with another husband and a new baby was living a life that wanted no part of the son of Warrick Brown. Grissom had known from the day she left the child that she would not return. 

?What?s the next step?? Gil Grissom was prone on the couch, a sleeping baby across his chest. The subject of the paperwork could be heard on the porch along with the quiet voice of Sara and the occasional high-pitched giggle of a two year old.

?The adoption judge reviews everything. It is pretty straight forward from this point. Depending on workload, plan to hear from his office in a week or ten days. You, Sara and Eli will need to appear in his chambers for the official signing. This guy likes to see the family group. And on that day, Eli officially becomes a Grissom.?

?Thanks so much. We?ll be there.?

It was difficult for him to fight the mixture of emotions he felt as he clicked the phone and dialed another number.

The baby he held, and her sister sleeping in the same room, were his own flesh and blood, planned and delivered into a welcoming, sunny world. Their mother bubbled with love even when both babies insisted on staying awake at two in the morning. Their two-year old sister, the one with the infectious giggle he heard, had been their introduction to parenthood?a gift, he believed, for waiting so long, for the fear and grief and darkness that invaded their lives and had metamorphosed into an intense love before their baby was born.

Little Bizzy had entered the world with a laugh instead of a cry and every day had been a delightful discovery for her ?older than usual? parents. The easy parenting with Bizzy made the two decide quickly to have a second child. On the day Sara learned she was pregnant with twins, Eli came to them. It was temporary, only six months, while his mother was out of the country.

Grissom knew?from the day of the request?Eli?s mother was giving the child to the man his father selected. He knew he had a son the day Eli took his hand without a glance back at his mother. The little boy was in their home less than a week when Sara became ?momma? to him. Several weeks later, in a children?s playground, Eli had pointed to another man with a boy, saying ?That?s his daddy.? He had looked up at Grissom asking, ?Will you be my daddy?? That day, all Grissom could do was nod his head.

Six months passed quickly and Grissom knew more than his heart would break if the boy left them. A letter arrived without notice, asking to extend temporary guardianship of Eli. Grissom and Sara decided to ask for permanent custody which led to an adoption attorney and a new direction. An exchange of money for signatures had paved the way in providing completed paperwork. In her favor, Tina did ask for an annual report and occasional contact with the son she was giving up. Sara laughed at the request; she had seen the interest, or lack of, taken in the child in six months.

Sara maintained that Eli was meant for them and would have eventually joined their family in some way. From the first day, she loved him as much as she loved her daughter?a gentle, quiet behavior of soothing words and physical contact, never clutching or demanding. She stayed calm, never raising her voice, and always smiling as she hugged a child for some mishap or tears.

The infant on his chest stirred as he left a message. He had promised to keep others who knew Eli?s father informed of their adoption progress. Everyone, it seemed, had held a breath, knowing a birth mother could change her mind.

Shadows, sounds, and activity appeared at the door. A small dark haired, blue-eyed girl, a little boy who looked much like the father he would never know, and a big brown dog appeared as Sara leaned against the doorframe while the two children tumbled and giggled to reach him. The dog waited patiently for a pat before curling on the floor.

?Let me take her,? Sara lifted the baby who snuggled and sighed at the familiar smell of her mother. The baby?s place was taken by Bizzy boosted up by Eli who scrambled to wedge himself beside Grissom with more giggles and chattering and scrambling.

Grissom made a loud grunt and both children laughed and toppled as he helped both find a place.

?Book. Read!? The two-year old waved her hand toward a stack beside the couch and Grissom picked a random book and held it up. Both children nodded.

?Sara, within two weeks?the lawyer called.? Grissom called to his wife as she disappeared out the door.

?The lawyer called.? Eli repeated.

?Yeah, buddy. We are going to add Grissom to your name. Remember when we talked about that?? Grissom said as the little boy nodded. Grissom was never sure how much a four-year old understood, but Eli seemed to know a lawyer had some special significance in his life.

Grissom read the caterpillar book?everyone?s favorite and every word already memorized by the two children. As he read the story, he heard Sara talking to the housekeeper who came for a few hours each day. He and Sara?s mother had insisted that household help would be needed with the addition of twins. Very reluctantly, Sara had agreed. It had worked out better than expected?like the mini-van.

He continued reading as one child?s breathing became the soft, regular breaths of sleep. Eli rubbed his eyes, knowing naptime was approaching and fighting to stay awake for a few more minutes. By the time the story ended, the boy was asleep. And because he was covered by two sleeping children, Grissom remained on the couch.

Quietness was rare in this house. A talkative four year old, learning new sentences every day, a two-year old who was just as talkative and stringing together words she heard from others, and the two babies, who slept a lot and cried some, kept the noise going at an almost constant level. Grissom closed his own eyes knowing the quietness would last about ten minutes.

He felt the presence of Sara. He always knew when she walked into the room; he had known this for years. He opened one eye.

?Hey,? he whispered.

She held one baby and sat down in the chair beside him. ?Annie wants to be fuzzy today. Maybe she?ll sleep for awhile.?

?You do a great job, Sara.?

Her hand reached to touch his face. ?Four kids, Gil, who would have thought we would have this?? Her fingers combed through his hair as she leaned over and kissed him. The baby grunted. ?I?ll move Bizzy to her bed.?

This time Grissom grunted. ?I?m fine. Go rest?you were up half the night. I?ve got these two.? He looked at the second sleeping baby. ?I?ve got three?go rest.?
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2009, 06:27:49 AM »
Lovely follow-up.  Looking forward to more when you can.

Trish

caz

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2009, 06:58:09 AM »
Another great follow up :)


Butterfly114

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2009, 07:27:53 AM »
Agree, great follow up, look forward to the next chapter

GSRLOVER34

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #4 on: March 12, 2009, 09:14:36 AM »
Agree with the rest, great follow up.

trishj

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #5 on: March 12, 2009, 11:23:27 AM »
I knew Tina would not want Eli, that's ok - Gil and Sara will give him a good home.  Great job, as always  Trish

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #6 on: March 12, 2009, 12:11:22 PM »
Five people entered the judge?s office nearly two weeks after the phone call. Sara?s mother came as part of the family group and carried Bizzy. The most recent additions had been left with neighbors who were thrilled to have two babies to rock and cuddle until their parents returned.

Eli knew an important event was taking place and seemed to stand taller as they entered the imposing building, holding hands with the two adults he knew as mother and dad. Their somber mood affected the two year old as her blue eyes took in the high ceiling entrance and dozens of people moving in and out. Even her mother appeared different today?solemn and grave instead of her usual quick smile.

?The judge decided to move you to the larger room when your family arrived.? The judge?s clerk said as she directed them to another area.

Grissom looked at Sara; she looked at him and mouthed ?family?? He shrugged and followed the woman. Sara looked back at her mother who was brushing curls away from Bizzy?s face. Double doors at the end of the hallway opened to a sun brighten conference room. Grissom glanced at Sara, guarded suspicion across his face. They expected no one else and both were thinking the same thought?Tina Brown had decided to make a last minute appearance.

At the door, the clerk waved her had. ?Come in. I think you?re in for a surprise.?

The room was filled with people?women from the community farm, their neighbors, stood facing the door, six or eight who had lived there for a decade; two were holding Annie and Ava. By some silent and secret signal, the group of women moved aside and Grissom and Sara saw who was hidden behind them?Catherine Willows rose first. Always the first to speak, today she smiled and nodded at the two dumb founded parents. Nick Stokes, dressed in a suit and tie, was next to her, his quick and ready grin already in place. Jim Brass and Greg Sanders flanked them. For a few seconds everyone was quiet as they took in the surprised looks on the faces of Gil and Sara Grissom. Someone laughed, another spoke a greeting, and everyone was talking. Grissom, very formally, introduced Eli to each man as they shook hands, and when Catherine?s turn came, she knelt with a two arm hug.

?You are so handsome today, Eli!? She said.

Very seriously, he said, ?Today my name is Eli Grissom.? Catherine hugged him again, partly to hide the tears in her eyes.

Conversations centered on questions and answers, how did everyone arrive at this place, where were they staying, how had they managed this surprise. Laughter filled the room as everyone talked at once as Sara and Grissom heard details of secret phone calls, hidden arrivals, even an unexpected stop was planned to give everyone time to arrive, and a gathering afterwards. Plans had been made and carried out without their knowledge and everything had worked perfectly.

The judge entered the room, without announcement or fanfare, to find multiple voices swirling around the room, and several minutes passed before anyone realized he had arrived. A quiet comprehension occurred as each person recognized the significance of this event and six of the adults remembered another time they were together with Eli Brown. The judge was introduced to Eli, Bizzy, and the parents who then introduced the others in the room. By the time he had shaken hands with everyone, papers were arranged on a table for signatures.

The dignified man sat at the table and asked for Eli?s hand. He asked several questions, delivered in words and terms understood by the four-year old, before asking if he were ready to have Gil and Sara Grissom as his real parents. The boy gave the smile of his father as he turned to look at the couple.

?Yes, and today my name is Eli Grissom.?

The judge looked up at the parents. ?Are you ready to be parents to Eli??

?Yes,? both said as they smiled at the child.

The judge turned to the assembled group. ?And is this group ready to add Eli to the family?? Everyone nodded, saying yes, as the judge signed papers and passed them to his clerk who pointed to places for the parents? signatures.

The judge stood, shaking Eli?s hand again, as he announced, ?It?s official?Eli Brown is now Eli Brown Grissom.? The little boy smiled as more than one adult in the room blinked back tears and a few brushed at eyes with a quick swipe of a hand, and at least one person coughed or cleared his throat.

A/N: We took some liberaties with writing this part just to get everyone there, so if you have ever been through an adoption, please forgive our fiction!
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #7 on: March 12, 2009, 12:34:25 PM »
So glad that he is a Grissom now.  :)

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #8 on: March 12, 2009, 12:49:51 PM »
That was beautiful, I loved it.  I really liked the way you worked the "rest of the family" in on it too.

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« Reply #9 on: March 12, 2009, 02:25:52 PM »
This was just lovely  ;D

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #10 on: March 12, 2009, 07:20:41 PM »
?Somehow, men and women separated. The men, few in numbers, had assembled around a table, talking about work, sports, the new construction on the Grissom house, and Las Vegas. The four had worked together for so many years that conversation came easily, randomly moving from one topic to another. Occasionally, Eli or Bizzy crawled into a lap and received undivided attention until something or someone caught their interest. Eli brought a ball to the table and Greg and Nick agreed to an outside game.

Grissom called as they left the house, ?Remember he?s only four!?

After they left, Jim leaned to Grissom asking, ?How do you do this, Gil??

?Do this? It?s the best thing I?ve every done.?

Jim shook his head, laughing. ?No?I see that?I see a completely changed Gil Grissom today. What I mean is how? Four babies in one house. Buying groceries?I can?t imagine. The house looks great; you look years younger. Sara looks like a girl?and she?s had three babies in two years!? He chuckled. ?Everyone took a financial beating in 2008 and you retired! Tell me your secret?not that I?ll every retire.?

Grissom grinned. He pointed toward the porch where Sara, Catherine, and Sara?s mother each held a baby. ?Sara.?

?Sara??

?Jim, she knew she could not stay in Vegas, not after Warrick. One day, she said she had to leave, wanted to take a trip. I thought I could not leave?of course, I was wrong, and she left alone. One of the things she did before leaving?while she was trying to convince me to go with her?she showed me what she had done with her savings, her retirement accounts. She had really done her research, moved money around; did not care that she wasn?t making money. She wanted safety.? He grinned as he continued. ?It?s that math and physics mind she has. And she never liked to gamble.

?I took her advice and did the same?we lost almost nothing, purchased this place when nothing was selling. She?s a genius, and not just with planning and money.? He laughed as he bent to pick up his daughter.

?Of course, it?s like the lab?everything runs smoothly, then everything happens at once. The washer breaks, Eli paints Bizzy up like Spiderman, Sara goes into labor, and I can?t get in touch with our neighbors because some highway crew has cut the phone line. I?m trying to get two kids into the van while my wife is counting breaths and all I can think about is delivering twins on the side of the road!?

Brass was laughing as tears ran down his face.

Grissom laughed, too. ?I can laugh today, but I don?t think I was laughing when it happened.?

Bizzy wiggled and squirmed until she had an arm around his neck and her head against his shoulder. ?Big day, Bizzy Bee.? Her little hand rested against his cheek.

?She?s the image of her mother except for those eyes.? Brass said.

?Yeah, it?s easy to love her.? Grissom?s hand covered the child?s back. ?I know this is weird, but I feel like I get to watch Sara grow up again, making everything how it should have been for her. With Eli, I want to do the same for him?make life as it should have been for his dad.?

A shout from outside brought both men to their feet and to the door. The women were already running toward a horizontal figure on the ground.

?Greg,? Brass said as they hurried across the front yard.

?It?s only a sprain,? they heard as they approached.

?He jumped and ran into the ground,? Eli said as he stood beside his mother who had placed an arm around the young boy as soon as she knelt beside Greg.

Nick had removed the shoe and sock. ?Man! When did you wash your socks?? He teased. ?You?ve been wearing them so long your foot is blue!?

Grissom and Brass glanced at each other, both men recognizing more damage than a twisted ankle.

?Get him up, Nick. I?ll bring the van.?

?Baby seats,? Sara called. With four baby seats in the van, there was limited space. Grissom quickly removed two.

A hurried, controlled chaos ensued while arranging Greg with foot propped up inside the van, Nick riding shot gun, and Grissom as driver headed to the nearest emergency clinic. In the rearview mirror, Grissom caught an image of three women holding three babies, and a man slow pitching a ball to a running boy as life resumed.

It disappeared as Greg said, ?Road trip?like the old days!? Nick groaned.

This one is short, another 2 or 3 posts to finish it.
"Long long afterward, in an oak I found the arrow, still unbroke..." (Longfellow & Sara Sidle, Ending Happy, 2007)

trishj

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #11 on: March 12, 2009, 08:18:41 PM »
Poor Greg.  Good thing Gil was there with a van.  Great story.

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #12 on: March 12, 2009, 10:48:58 PM »
The description of the courtroom was wonderful, Eli Grissom is now with a large loving family.
Poor Greg, road trip to the ER, what a sight.
Look forward to the next update.

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #13 on: March 12, 2009, 11:30:07 PM »
Great chapter!

That was a really sweet thing for Grissom to say, he feels like he gets to watch Sara grow up all over again and make things like it should have been for her and  Eli.

Billyjorja

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Re: Saying Yes to Eli
« Reply #14 on: March 13, 2009, 06:38:58 AM »
Lovely chapters, you make everything so real.

Trish