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RusCSI

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #60 on: November 07, 2008, 01:01:26 AM »
Poor people... Oh, poor Gil, poor Sara... A hope is died last, so he must believe in it and save her!

Billyjorja

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #61 on: November 07, 2008, 06:28:20 AM »
Your peace offering is gratefully received.  Can't wait for more.

Trish

LadyLauraAnn

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #62 on: November 08, 2008, 09:15:14 PM »
Yay, you are posting here!!  Can't wait for the next chapter!!

csi_forever1

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #63 on: November 09, 2008, 11:49:36 AM »
Hey everyone! Sorry about the massive amount of delays. Life in the real world (yuck :-\ ) is being puh-retty crazy! But here's a couple chapters to keep you lovely readers happy. :D

Chapter 13:

   "Can I get you anything?" Laura asked him as she rose out of her seat, "water, coffee..." she offered.

   "Coffee, please." he answered politely. As she began walking, Grissom got up from the couch and looked around the room. Sara watched sadly as he walked over to a small side table and picked up a small framed photo. Walking up behind him, she wiped her tears and gave a small smile. It was a picture of her family, from many years ago. She noticed how Grissom studied it, as he would anything else; it was his nature. Sara had been 4 at the time, during a time when her family was still a happy one. No fighting, or trips to the hospital. Setting the picture down, he turned as Laura reentered the room, with two cups of coffee. Taking one of the cups from her hand, he thanked her and sat back down.

               After a moment, Laura broke the silence. "I just want you to know," she said quietly as she readjusted herself in her seat, "that all Sara could talk about the first couple months was how she missed you." she finished softly. Grissom offered a smile and slowly nodded as he sipped his coffee. While Sara watched and listened she sat next to him as she brought his hand into hers, just so she could feel him, and know that he really was there. She almost jumped when something strange happened. As soon as she had taken a hold of his hand, he flinched, as he glanced downward at his hand and reflexively put it into his pocket. Sara's shock soon turned to hope.

   "Gil," she whispered, "Gil I'm right here." she said louder. But Grissom didn't respond. Laura then stood up and began walking.

   "I can show you her room if you follow me here." she said over her shoulder as she walked down the hall and turned into a small bedroom. Grissom stood and followed her, with Sara trailing behind him. He entered the room and looked around. A bed laid between a nightstand and a tall lamp on one end of the room, and on the other end, a dresser. It wasn't much, but it was where Sara had been staying and dealing with her problems, alone. Walking over to the bed, he laid his hand on the soft comforter.

   "I'll be in the kitchen if you need anything." Laura said as she exited the room, closing the door behind her, and left Grissom alone. Sitting on the bed, he picked up the pillow and brought it up to his face, breathing in deeply. He smiled into the fabric as it smelt of her; how he missed waking up to the scent of her shampoo. But back in Vegas, over the months, her scent had faded away from the pillows, Hank had stopped waiting by the door for her, and had he stopped preparing dinner for two. He stopped living the way he had become so accustomed to, the way he loved living. And he missed it more than anyone could ever imagine. Sara sat next to him on the bed and watched him as she began speaking to him, as if he could hear her.

   "I missed you," she whispered, "I still do." she said as she ran her hand down his arm, hoping to recieve another reaction like the one before. But there was nothing, no flinch, no anything. Maybe it was just coincidence, She thought. "I wish you could hear me," she said as he put the pillow down, "see me," he then spotted the drawer to the side table open about an inch, and opened it slowly, "feel me." Grissom then spotted the picture Sara had been keeping. She scooted over closer to him and peered over his shoulder. She let out a quick laugh as she realized what he had found. Picking up the photograph Grissom ran his hand over her face as he smiled at the memory. He then set the picture down on the bed and closed the drawer as he blinked back unshed tears. Sara wanted to just hold him and tell him she was okay, but that wouldn't be the truth. She wasn't okay, her time was running out by the second. He put his head in his hands and then stood up and walked to the far side of the room. He looked out the window and over the front yard as a car passed by the road ahead. Sara sighed as she made her way over to him, resting her hand on his shoulder when she reached him.

   "I wish I could tell you how much I lov-"

   "I wish I had told you how much I love you." he said outloud, unknowingly cutting off Sara, mid-sentence. Before Sara could react, her mother entered the room and broke the eeiry silence.

   "Will you be staying for dinner?" she asked kindly. He then smiled at her and shook his head.

   "No thank you, I think I should get going." he said walking back over to the bed, picking up the picture and slipping it into his pocket. Watching them interact, Sara began to follow them out of the bedroom door; something was happening. Something weird. And she was going to follow him until she knew what to do next.



One more chapter today, coming up! :D <3

csi_forever1

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #64 on: November 09, 2008, 12:12:39 PM »
Chapter 14:

   Sara followed them out of the room, through the hallway, and into the foyer.

   "Well, it was very nice meeting you," Grissom politely said as he held out his hand.

   "Likewise," Laura said, shaking his hand, "If I hear anything, anything at all, then I'll let you know." She said to him comfortingly, with a sad smile.

   Grissom nodded and gave her a small "thank you," before going out the door and up to his rental car. Sara watched him from the front lawn as he unlocked the car and opened the door, thinking if she should go with him or not.

   Back inside, Laura went into the kitchen to start cleaning up. But when her eyes found the opened first aid kit, still laying on the kitchen countertop, one name popped into her head. "Jason," she nearly gasped.

   Sara, at the last minute, decided that it was best if she went with him. She opened the passenger door and hopped in just seconds before Grissom began backing out of the driveway. When she slammed the car door shut, it still frusterated her that he couldn't hear or see the simple task, just like it wasn't even happening. But then something caught him off-gaurd. Just after he had gotten the car out of the driveway and onto the street, Laura Sidle bursted through the front door of the house, waving her arms and yelling at him to stop. Which he, of course, did. Rather abruptly though.

   "Damnit!" Sara yelled as the car jerked to a stop, catching her by suprise as she flew forward about a foot, stopping only when the dashboard got in the way. Mumbling under her breath, she put the seat-belt on and crossed her arms in front of her chest, looking like a 5-year old whose parents wouldn't buy her ice cream.

   Rolling down the window, Grissom gazed curiously at the woman, who had covered the space between the front door of the house and the edge of her yard in record-time. Reaching her destination, she didn't even pause to catch her breath before she started talking a mile a minute.

   "When the police came by earlier, they asked me if they knew anyone who would want to hurt Sara, and I said I wouldn't know, but actually I forgot about someone who might have had something to do with this," stoping for a moment, Laura took, what seemed to be, the first breath since she left her house, and then continued, "Jason Hughes. He's our next door neighbor and he and Sara got into an arguement yesterday morning. Actually it hadn't been the first time but--"

   "Laura," Grissom said as he raised his hand up, signaling for her to stop, "you need to slow down. Now who is this again?"

   Sara who had been watching her mother ramble on, word after word, then sat up in her seat and looked at her mom, a wide smile spread across her face. "Yes!" she whispered excitedly to herself.

   Laura took a few deep breaths before continuing. "His name is Jason Hughes. He and Sara had an argument yesterday morning which resulted in Sara getting a sprained wrist. He even makes threats to her almost daily and I haven't seen him since Sara disappeared, and... oh God..." Laura seemed to want to say something else, but nothing else escaped her mouth, except the small half-sob, half-cough that fought it's way through her words.

   Grissom smiled at her and gave her small reassurances that everything would be okay. He waited for her to go back inside the house before he pulled back out into the street.

   "That's it," Sara said while facing him, sporting a large yet loving smile, "come find me."

   The smile had faded from his lips as a fire ignighted in his eyes. He didn't know where he was going or how he'd find this guy, but one thing was for sure. He would like to have a chat with this, Jason Hughes.

   The first place that Grissom thought to go was back to the Police Department to give them the little bit of information that he had just acquired... and also to find this guy. Parking the car in the first spot he could find, he quickly got out and made his way toward the building. While he walked toward the station, he was lucky enough to find the man he had talked to earlier, regarding Sara, leaving. Quickening his pace just slightly, he reached the man as he was getting into his car.

   "Officer Owens." Grissom said.

   "I'm off duty," the man said, without looking up. He then began to fumble around with his keys and cursed under his breath when he dropped them on the floor of the car.

   "It's Gil Grissom," he informed the officer, "we spoke earlier..." he continued, trying to jog the cop's memory. Lifting up his head the man looked at Grissom.

   "Oh yeah. Um, what can I do for you?" he asked, seemingly confused about this 2nd visit to the police station. Grissom then filled the officer in on what he had learned at Laura Sidle's house, or at least, what he had learned regarding Jason Hughes.

   Looking at Grissom, the man pulled out his notepad that he carried with him, flipped a couple pages, and returned his gaze to Grissom. "Did you say Hughes? As in Jason Hughes?" he inquired. Upon receiving Grissom's nod, he continued talking. "Mr. Hughes was picked up by the cops yesterday afternoon, before the missing person report was filed." Grissom's eyes widened as the man kept talking, "Drug possession." Henry shrugged. "His girlfriend bailed him out about a half an hour ago though," he said, glancing down at his watch, "so he's probably back home by now."

   Grissom then took a deep breath and remained silent. Probably thinking about what he should do next. Sensing this, the cop decided to give him a warning, "Listen, I know you're upset about, all of this," he said, gesturing with his hands, "but you can't go looking for this guy. Hell, I'd be in deep shit if they knew I was even telling you all of this."

   Grissom gave him a smile and shrug as he said, "I understand." But that doesn't mean I can't have just a chat with him, he thought.

   "Good." the officer said, clearly pleased with the understanding. "Now I assure you we have people, good people, working on this case." he said, giving Grissom some more assurance, before giving him a quick nod, closing his car door and driving off.

   Sara, who had been leaning against a nearby car, listening to the men's conversation, was smiling to herself as the excitement she had was clearly showing through. As Grissom began the walk back to the car, she hurried up next to him and walked alongside him. "If anyone can do it," she said as she ran her hand up and down his arm, "you can." She said quietly. "Come find me."

   Upon hearing this, Grissom nearly jumped out of his skin as he quickly looked over his shoulder, and spun around an entire 360 degrees. Sara then stopped walking and watched as Grissom looked around the parking lot while making his way back to the car. "He heard me," she said outloud, almost as a question more than a statement, "he heard me," she repeated, much louder this time, and with more affirmation. Then as Grissom got into the car, she ran towards the car, full speed, adrenaline rushing, on the way, yelling, "He heard me!"

                Jumping in the car and grabbing a hold of his hand, she lifted it up to her lips and gave it a soft kiss as she set it back down.

   Grissom then gazed cautiously at his hand as a strange feeling overtook him. It felt as if he had just run his hand through a cobweb. I must be more tired than I realized... he thought. He had been awake for way more than 24 hours.

   Driving off, he made his way towards his hotel room. He was no use to help Sara if he wasn't alert.

   Sara, on the other hand, was more awake than ever at the moment as she sat back in her seat and smiled to herself. He's gonna find me, she kept repeating in her head, over and over again. He's gonna find me...



Okay you wonderful readers! Let me know what you think. :)

sixtyplus

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #65 on: November 09, 2008, 12:36:33 PM »
Yet again brilliant ,you got to update soon PLEASE  ;D

RusCSI

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #66 on: November 09, 2008, 12:58:09 PM »
Uh, I like it with all my soul. Especially when Grissom felt her touchings, heard her - yes, it's great! I'll wait next.

Billyjorja

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #67 on: November 10, 2008, 06:02:46 AM »
Brilliant, can't wait for more.

Trish

GSRLOVER34

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #68 on: November 10, 2008, 08:56:37 AM »
great chapters! this story is really good! continue when you can

sam11108

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #69 on: November 11, 2008, 08:14:00 AM »
yes really good story.  can't wait for more.

RusCSI

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #70 on: November 11, 2008, 08:21:28 AM »
Hey, Shannon! That's really good! I've seen next updates on ff - that's awesome... :D

csi_forever1

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #71 on: November 11, 2008, 11:40:24 PM »
Okay, really quick! I'm not sure where I left off on the old boards but if someone could tell me whether or not this is "new" then please let me know. I feel like I am caught up from then but I'm not too sure.
 Here you go:

Chapter 15:

               Arriving at the hotel only minutes before, Grissom had gotten to his room and was sitting on the bed of the hotel room. He had his head in his hands, thinking about the events that had just happened in the course of a little over a day. And about how Sara--, his Sara, was missing. Missing. How could this happen... again, he thought. Everything was supposed to be fine after Natalie was put away. They were happy. They were going to get married. Married. He sadly smiled to himself. He actually hadn't planned on proposing that day. Sure he had thought of it, but when he saw her, and how beautiful she looked even in the silliest bee outfit even, he knew he needed her in his life. And he didn't want to wait one more moment. When she said yes, he couldn't stop smiling.

               Then she left. He blamed himself mostly for her leaving. If only he wasn't so thick-headed and had paid more attention to her. The team had tried to ask about what happened. All he would say was that she was visiting her mother. A sort of "break", he told them. People wouldn't bring her up that much anymore anyway. He would always brush it off or change the subject and the team just learned to accept his silence of the matter.

               The team.

               He needed to call back to Vegas to check up on things. He almost forgot that he didn't have his cell phone with him. Catherine would be worried sick if he didn't call, he thought. And maybe they had more information back there than he did in his current situation. Picking up the phone of the small room, he dialed Catherine's number. He didn't even have to wait for the first ring to end when he quickly heard, "It's about time you called."



               "It's about time you called." Catherine said as she sighed into the phone.

               "Hey Catherine." Grissom said tiredly. There was a slight pause into the phone until Catherine asked the question that had been hanging in the air.

               "Have they found her, yet?" she asked softly. Grissom inhaled deeply,

               "No." he simply said. "What did Archie find?" Grissom asked, now in full investigator mode. He waited as he heard a shuffling of papers on the other end. Catherine cleared her voice and gave him the information she knew.
"I talked to Archie, off the record," she emphasized, "and he was able to clear up the tape enough to understand it clearly. A copy of the message has already been sent to the lab in San Francisco." Taking everything Catherine had just told him in, he hesitated before asking his next question.

              "What did the message say?"

               There was now another pause, longer than the previous one.

               "Look, Grissom..."

               "Catherine," he said sternly, cutting her off. His patience was wearing thin. He took a moment to compose himself before speaking softer into the phone, "just tell me what she said." Grissom heard a few more papers shuffle around before she began reciting it.

           " 'Gil. Gil, help. Help. Well. Hurt,' " Catherine paused for a few seconds before     she resumed reciting the message, " 'Please, help. Gil. I need you,' " Grissom was on the verge of tears as he imagined Sara somewhere, cold, scared, alone, " 'I love you.' That's where the line goes dead." Catherine finished, speaking at almost a whisper. She cleared her throat and began speaking again. "Archie also said that there was heavy rain in the background. He also said that it sounded outdoors, so I hope that helps..." she said, trailing off. Grissom now had tears clouding his exhausted eyes. His heart was being torn in two. Blinking back the tears, he knew he couldn't lose himself over the phone. "Gil..." Catherine whispered to him.

           "Yeah, thank you, Cath," he said, finally finding his voice, "so much."

           "Don't worry, you'll find her." Catherine spoke, "and we're all here for you."

           "Yeah," he said, as if he were trying to convince himself of that, "thanks again, Catherine."

           "Bring home our girl." Catherine said, as the call was ended. Grissom then hung up the phone and layed down to sleep, Only for a couple of hours, he told himself as he quickly dozed off; not even bothering to take off his shoes.

           Sara then slowly emerged from her spot in the corner of the room where she had been settled, listening in on Grissom's coversation. A serious look spread was across Sara's face as she wondered how far the people working on her case had got. Hopefully they were close; if not, she would most likely die, and soon. That then led her mind to Jason, and Emma; the poor girl. Deciding to take the time she would have before he would wake to her advantage, she walked over to the bed where Grissom appeared to be out like a light. Leaning over, she ran her hand through his hair and placed a soft kiss on his forehead and on the top of his head. Whispering into his hair she gave him a simple promise, "I'll be back before you know it." Kissing his forehead again, she walked towards the door and found her way out and heading towards her next destination.


Okay. I feel like I'm now caught up! I hope at least... but I have a couple more pre-written chapters to post before the writing from scratch continues, again! :)

RusCSI

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #72 on: November 12, 2008, 02:57:38 AM »
Thank you, Shannon! I love new updates!!! Can't wait to see here chapter 17 where Grissom feels her!!!

GSRLOVER34

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #73 on: November 12, 2008, 08:54:05 AM »
i don't remember reading this part on the old board, this is really getting interesting, great ud btw, keep going!

sam11108

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Re: The Invisible
« Reply #74 on: November 12, 2008, 09:40:03 AM »
great updates...its all new to me.